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Gramma teases

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
Eternal Muse
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A terrific children's poem with great imagery and visuals. I loved your descriptive imagery and the choice of an artwork. This should make an excellent entry to the contest, good luck in the booths.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
    Eternal muse, thanks but ugh, not so much, but my grandchildren smiled and that?s a huge win...
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roof35
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This is well rhymed and well written with no errors. I got a chuckle out of the story. I think a child would like it as well. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
    Roof, thanks a ton, it was fun!
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