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Healing


Nothing stays the same

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Comment by
Marjon van Bruggen
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Calle Romani, 14
 
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Very well done! "Hope hovers hesitantly" beautiful use of the consonant H over the whole poem. H is a soft tone, giving the right careful direction of the poem significance. The "heads heavenward" concludes this healing perfectly.
Harvest healthy hope hereafter.


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
    Thank you! I appreciate your time, your words, and your alliteration:)

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 08-Sep-2020
    Welcome!
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The Higher Power is our ultimate Healer and Doctor. Nothing is impossible if we just keep our faith high... meek and humble to seek for His Gift of Healing. Good luck!


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
    Thank you for reading and reviewing. Healing comes in different forms. Hope keeps us going:)
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