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Corona effect?


10 word poem

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You have used your ten words effectively in this timely piece. There are those who still are almost totally isolating, those who are still like "DUH! What pandemic?!" and those in-between. I'm in-between.


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much.I think I am also in-between
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Hello, anonymous,

Interesting entry for the
10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. I like the imagery in your poem. The presentation is nice too. I like the covid19 topic. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much.
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This ten-word poem, Corona Effect, has the proper word count and finds that the pets are made curious by our odd cloistering.


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much
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A very well-written ten-word poem about the effect of the coronavirus that keeps the humans in their cages and the pets wonder what happen that they are not taken for walks anymore.


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much.
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Amen, my friend! I don't know about all of you, but I feel locked in a cage. Maybe we're all on one giant Time-Out, hehe.

Great image, very timely,

Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much.Yes it is a giant time out!
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How things can radically change when we take another point of view!!! This is clearly expressed in your writing. Picture plays in this case a main role as without that dog, poem would be totally "left in the wind". But picture adds a sense of humanity and "closeness" to what we have seen worldwide.


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much .Since the word limit was 10 the picture becomes necessary ..

reply by palmart on 17-Sep-2020
    Perfect Sanku! Yours is a good point of view.
    Hope you the Best in coming contests!
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This is a fine thought for the 10 Word Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



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    Thank you very much.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 18-Sep-2020
    You're very welcome!
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Corona effect indeed. Wryly ironic--what a twist--dogs on the loose whilst we're locked in our cages. Well and concisely stated! Good luck. Cheers. LIZ


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Yes it is ironical isnt'it? .I can see birds flying around too
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Ha, Ha, Ha, this is a good one:"Where are the humans these days?
locked in their cages? " We are in cage indeed. Thank you for sharing and good luck wit the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much ..is funny but yet it is not..frustrating..
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Haha - yes, it must be confusing for other creatures. Everything has been turned on its head... it does feel like we've been locked in our cages, even if they are nice surroundings, we've lost many former freedoms. Cute picture - portrays that perplexed expression well, to reinforce your poem.


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much.Yes I used to wonder when I see the birds,dogs and cats continue as usual if it is a topsy turvy world...
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