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Faith in the Fog


Asking God for help.

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Robert Reischl
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Do you find uncertainty and adversity makes you appreciate more the triumph of persevering and overcoming? I do. I still hate it though, when I have to persevere and struggle to overcome whatever obstacles are in front of me. Best wishes.


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Did you find mistakes that, if corrected, wouldve changed your review score on my poem?

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Did you find mistakes that, if corrected, wouldve changed your review score on my poem?
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Faith in the Fog

Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the Faith Poetry writing prompt contest. You rely on God for guidance and clarity. I know it helps in this dark time


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Thank you!

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Thank you!
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A very well-written faith poem about the fog surrounding us and we need a light to guide us through the gig into the right direction we can only pray and He will show us His eternal light.


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Thank you.
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I know how the darkness blinds the eyes, for many times is has shadowed mine, author. God is light, by following Him you can only do right. This is a very good offering for the Faith Poetry contest. I do have one suggestion. On your last line, " With faith in fog, I'll follow wherever you may go." You may want to place a comma after faith. It sounds like you have "faith in fog." :) Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Good point. I will look at that. Thank you for this.
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This is a beautiful read.
I enjoy the correlation between literal fog and clouded thoughts. Darkness doesn't make anything clearer for us. Light, however, gives us direction.

Great work


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the nice review!

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the nice review!
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Your own light shines in this poem, as you seek that of God's. Your poem's title and key point - "Faith in Fog" - shows that even in times when we are caught with uncertainty, God Himself is ever-faithful. We have to let our love, and the knowledge that his light is right, keep us on a committed path.
Your rhyming couplets have an easy flow with a feeling of sincerity in the words. I noted the change from the first stanza being of 13-syllable lines and the following ones being 14-syllable structure, and some purists might expect the stanzas to be consistent, but it did not bother me as far as rhythm and the poem's overall successful delivery. Well done - it's a real contender for winning.


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
    Thanks for the review! I will peek at the syllable counts.

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
    Thanks for the review! I will peek at the syllable counts.
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