Take Your Burdens to Jesus
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COVID -19 all is cancelled

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Comment by
Raul1
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It is all true from what you have said that everything looks cancelled, but thinking about everything will be fine is thinking optimistic. Nice job! I think that this world will turn into a happy one again, but there isn't the normal but the new normal. Good luck!


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    Raul, yes we are going through an adaptive human experience. One that will likely evolve with a new understanding that qe never have to the realization of before COVID.
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karenina
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Nice writing that so many of us can relate to. This virus has turned our lives upside down in many ways. One thing I noticed, and would urge you to edit prior to voting is your spelling of cancelled (in some places you write canceled) and canceling (which, likewise should be two "L's"... If you're like me it's those little things that can slip through, but they are easily corrected! Best of luck in the contest.--Karenina


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    Geez, not like me to miss that thank you so much!

reply by karenina on 15-Sep-2020
    No problem--you're doing very well in the votes so far! It happens to all of us!--Karenina
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Iza Deleanu
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I think you captured very well how we all feel in this "new norm" when we have to give up on so many things. Your last line captured very well our collective frustration:"
Canceled, the new norm - the perfect storm, the bug unseen,
just makes me want to scream I am not going to be canceled anymore!
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Iza, thank you, I am amazed how so many of us feel this way.
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jenintorre
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I like this story a lot. You really say it how it is. It confirms the uncertainty that we all have and your last line is just how I feel. Life has to be for living. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen,


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Jen, thanks much!
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