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Colorful Dreams


Children's imagination

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Jmf4119
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A lovely 10 word poem with beautiful artwork that does bring to mind a child's imagination. You are so right, it has no limits and should be encouraged.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Janet:)
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I agree with you Tina, and if they're deeply loved in God's way, that kaleidoscope should be even more pronounced and bounced. Beautifully written, I delight in my offspring and their offspring, they are doing well. Well done Tina. Good luck, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Roy. Children are a blessing. I think I came in last place, haha!

reply by royowen on 12-Sep-2020
    Don?t worry we all suffer rejection of people, you always have my vote.

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Aw...I appreciate your kindness, and I hope to emulate your effortless rhythm in poetry!
    I just dont think I'm cut out for the contests. It makes me anxious wondering if I am good enough...which is no way to be. I'm just gonna write because it's fun!
    Tina

reply by royowen on 12-Sep-2020
    Don?t worry I don?t enter them, it distracts me, keep going dear girl, you?ll get ther.

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Distraction...yes.You nailed it. It is distracting. Thanks, Roy. I want to improve, do I appreciate the encouragement:)

reply by royowen on 12-Sep-2020
    Bless you, I have never even been placed in a site contest, but I have in sponsored contests. So I don?t do them anymore, but I sometimes use them as prompts. Don?t despair,
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This ten-word poem, Colorful Dreams, has the proper word count and reminds the reader that the imagination provides for things not visible or tangible.


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Thank you!
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"Colorful Dreams", is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Each short line is woven with rainbow colors. To me, this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them. Good luck in the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Thank you . This means a lot!

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 13-Sep-2020

    You're very welcome!
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Excellent ten word poem. Blissful dream... Life filled with colors... It brings real joy in one's heart. I love it! Perfect artwork & write-up.

All the best in the contest!


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Thank you!!
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This is a fine thought for the 10 Word Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much:)

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 12-Sep-2020
    You're very welcome!
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I like the central image of the colors here standing for the limitless scope of the imagination of a child. Its a simple, clean image, very focused, and it works here in this tight space. estory


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Thank you:)
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Colorful Dreams

Hello anonymous

Nice entry for the 10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. I agree with you, children's imagination is awesome and should be encouraged.


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Thank you!
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A very well-written ten-word poem about the colorful dreams of a child that we should always encourage and let them explore their imagination even when it means you have to wash or paint the wall again.


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    That's so true!

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    That's so true!

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    That's so true!
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Children have this power to let dreams and fantasy seem real and they escape into this world probably because the adult world is too complex for them to understand, this escapism you brought to our eyes in your poem here, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much!
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