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Silence


Freeverse about silence.

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LOL!! Yep, gotta have just a little something to remind you that you're not in a vacuum, yeah? :) ;) Sometimes, though, its a welcome 'ringing' that helps to calm an over-stimulated mind.... ;) :) Thanx so much for such a cool free verse, Tina -- the formatting really makes a difference in the impact of this one. ;) ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Thanks, Yvette, for the review . I always like hearing you get my words. Yes...I need noise so I cant hear the silence,lol!
    Til next time:)
    Tina

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Thanks, Yvette, for the review . I always like hearing you get my words. Yes...I need noise so I cant hear the silence,lol!
    Til next time:)
    Tina
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I like how you organized and arranged the words like a staircase going down and then we're back to the left margin with the request for noise to return to overcome the deafening silence. Great job!


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Helen. I was trying to be dramatic because the deafening silence surprised me! I appreciate the review:)
    Tina
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Hello Tina Crute your Free verse about silence.
Is clever way of how the sound of nothing can make one believe that they lost their hearing
Gert

DEAFENING! Good word


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Exactly, Gert. You got it! Thank you for reading this:)
    You are much appreciated!
    Tina
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Stunning artistic presentation here. I liked the touch of humor when you call for silence, as you can't hear yourself think (lol). Then your last time is totally hilarious as you are inviting noise to come. Great creative imagery and visuald.

Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    I am glad you liked it. Thank you for reading and reviewing:)
    Tina
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This is unique and fresh. I liked the staggered lines. It creates emotion and a touch of humor.

I adore the quiet and am distracted easily by noise. It's funny, my home environment is very quiet, and it is there I pray and write.

Sending you my best today, and blessings always,
Sally XOs.....


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Thank you for reading, Sally. I'm so used to tv, facebook, music in my earbuds, that sitting in a quiet room feels weird. I'm trying to change my ways though. God deserves my full attention.
    I'm grateful for you!
    Lots of xxxs and ooos,
    Tina
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