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We too shall rise

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Gert sherwood
 
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Aussie Your ABC poem about Our Lord dying on the cruel rugged cross, by the power of God to give us Eternal Life in the abode in the Heavenly Home of God. How did you do in the contest?
Gert


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Hi Gert, I am very passionate about getting the 'word' out about the Lord. More than ever we need His love and care. I don't know how I did in the contest...been busy painting instead. Bless you my friend. Love. Kay. xxx
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It is awesome to think that God new exactly what was needed to bring us to Him for eternity and yet, He went ahead and did it. The sacrifice of His Beloved Son is too extraordinary to fully comprehend. I think this is a beautiful entry in the Acrostic contest, Kay. Best wishes!!!


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Hello my friend and thank you for reviewing. Blessings, Kay xx
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Raffaelina Lowcock
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It says and you wrote an Acrostic Poem. The message is profound in that it declares our Eternal Life. How else could he have gotten that message across other than Rising from the Dead. Well done.


Ralf


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Hello my friend across the miles. Thank you for reading and I'm pleased you have understood my sentiments. Love, Kay.
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Hi Kace, I have wondered many times on when God says it is to late to repent...that there will be those that He will say...go away...I never saw you...can you not believe your entire life...and at the last minute...say I believe...because face it...when you see He is true...
then you do believe...but is it to late???...love your poem Sweetie Pie...very well written...and I love this picture...
God Bless...and take care...you and Toby Dog...love you lots...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    "If you truly repent of your sins, god will forgive you." It's never too late unless the person is repenting for no other reason than to save his scrawny neck. God said, "go away, I never knew you." In a nutshell, one must be sincere and give up everything including his previous life. Thanks for reading my precious penny. K xx

reply by l.raven on 18-Sep-2020
    your so welcome beautiful lady...love lots...xxoo
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This is a very beautiful acrostic poem you have penned for the contest. it is so full of the truth. Very lovely picture. Check out your notes since this is for a contest. It is a very nice and well written Acrostic poem. Best wishes in the contest. love, teri


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Hello my friend Teri, I hope all is well with you? Thanks for your review, I thought you would appreciate the acrostic. Much love, K xx
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Excellent acrostic form that follows Jesus from His death to his rising up and returning to life. Excellent acrostic form that is a faith based poem and shows how faith can lead to a happy event like Jesus returning to life.


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
    Hi Elaine, Thanks for reading, glad you liked. He is our only help and peace. Love, Kay. xx
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Who can better sum up than faith in the Lord's joy and comfort
Courage to keep going amidst. A beloved King of Kings soon to
return with a profound love for all of us. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
    Hello Edward, Thanks for reading and your comments. He is our only hope in these dark days. blessings, Kay.
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aryr
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Good luck in the contest, Kace. This was well done and is a constant reminder of faith and belief and love. You presented it very well and your picture choice was wisely chosen. Great job.


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Hello my friend, thanks so much for reading. Blessings, K xx
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Marjon van Bruggen
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Calle Romani, 14
 
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An acrostic with a rock-solid faith in our Lord, the Savior of us all, we only have to believe and pray.
We can live in this difficult world, in difficult times, and still be serene and happy. We know we are loved and guided, thank the Lord!


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Hello Marjon, Thanks so much for reading. Peace be with you. Love, K xx

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 14-Sep-2020
    So welcome! Thanks for the appreciated vote!
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