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6 word poem

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Debra Franze

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Nice 6 word poetry very hard to do and project some meaning. You did it! Very creative well done poem. I like it! Congratulations on the ribbon.

Comment Written 18-Sep-2020

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Thank you very much.

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It took a few seconds for me to get this, but then there was an "aha" moment. So much meaning in so few words.. worthy of high praise. Best of luck.

Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

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Thank you very much.

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Hello, my friend. You certainly made good use of the six words allowed, Your use of very strong verbs made this a wonderful, image-laden write. Good luck with it. :) Bob

Comment Written 16-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020

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reply by Mastery on 21-Sep-2020

Hello Stranger :) Posting chapter fourteen this week. Bob

reply by Mastery on 21-Sep-2020

Hello Stranger :) Posting chapter fourteen this week. Bob

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You did a good job with your contest entry. The image is perfect for your well-chosen 5 words. I like the comparison of the waves and mind both bringing up debris.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment Written 16-Sep-2020

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Thank you very much.

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Your short poem creates a clear picture of nature and also evokes feelings from the reader. The image of debris at the shore, specifically debris from the sea, brings up images and thoughts. Excellent use of descriptive words.

Comment Written 16-Sep-2020

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Thank you very much.

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A very well-written six-word poem about the ocean waves and the thoughts in our minds both draw debris that is heaping up and are difficult to get rid of if we don't clean if regularly.

Comment Written 16-Sep-2020

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Thank you very much.

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-Very nice image, Sanku,
and good presentation.
-You have used your
six words well with
a good topic and imagery.
-The message is an
important one, too-
a cluttered mind
will attract more debris,
and crash like the waves.
-Good luck in the contest.

Comment Written 16-Sep-2020

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Than you very much .

reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Sep-2020

You are very welcome.

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Few words that resonate with me as my mind is often filled with things I would rather forget but my thoughts won't let me as they are also attached to my feel emotions, I enjoyed your 6 worder here, love Dolly x

Comment Written 16-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020

Thank you very much.It is very much my own experience .And I struggle to get rid of it.

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You have done a great job of choosing your words; they convey a powerful message. Your comparison is very clear to me! I think of how, when I brood on and on, my thoughts become NOT more lucid, but like the debris you speak of.

Comment Written 15-Sep-2020

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Thank you very much.

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Joanne Gill

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Nice 6 word poem. Awesome photo as well. Heaving waves brooding minds draw debris. Mother Nature with its power bring many beautiful treasure to shore. I like this.

Comment Written 15-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020

Thank you very much

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