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Birth, life, death

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Meia (MESAYERS)
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An absolutely excellent poem especially as it is written in such a specific form. I enjoyed it immensely and this is marvelous well done superb kindest regards M:)


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
    Meia, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this poem, have a great weekend!
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It seems like a very poignant and sad poem, as an entry in this contest, very good and also very relevant a lesson to all those who relate to life such as it is, good rhyming, and a excellently scribed entry, well done, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



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    Roy, thank you kindly.

reply by royowen on 19-Sep-2020
    Most welcome
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This is an interesting entry for the Minute poem contest. I've never tried this poem form and find it daunting, but you managed it effectively. Your poem has an ethereal quality to it. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
    Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this poem, have a great weekend!
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I enjoyed reading this introspective verse and feel your use of yourself as a topic was well chosen. Great job on the rhyme choices and the artwork that is very complimentary. Good luck.

Melissa


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
    Smiling back!
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What an interesting Minuet Poem!I love the theme and the internal rhymes - it makes it whimsical and fun.
I didn't see any errors in SPAG, so I believe you're good to go!
Best in the contest and blessings,
Deb


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
    Deb, thanks much! I love the blessing and one right back at you!
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I loved the artwork you chose for your Minute poem, and your stanzas all made perfect sense. I'm a Frost fan, so of course this harkened back to him for me, an always welcome respite. Nice work, and good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



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    Laurie, I do so value your validation and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
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Wow, this looks like a difficult poem to format. Excellent work! I love how you have chronicled birth to death in such a short verse. And in the end death was just another journey and freeing


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



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    I reap the benefit of smiling at your wise comment, thank you and enjoy your weekend to its fullest and highest possibilities.
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I lie the originality of this poetry, author. Each phase of life handled poetically is something seldom thought of, I believe. It flows so well from beginning to end. :) Bob


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



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    Bob, thanks have a nice weekend!
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You've gone through your life in a minute! Lol. That was clever and very well done. The minute form is fun, I've written a few, but my last one was a minute and sixty seconds, I wrote four stanzas! I think yours is a strong contest entry, it's unique. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



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    Sandra, I am impressed and I do value the good wishes, thank you!

reply by sandramitchell on 18-Sep-2020
    You are very welcome! :))
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This is an excellent poem for the minute contest
true to the form in rhymes and syllables.
The meter, however, should be iambic, unstressed/stress.
Some of the four syllable lines are not iambic
such as lines 2,3,4 6.
Otherwise well done with a good theme.
Good luck in the contest
Robert


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Thanks
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