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Clark Kentish?


Sees right through

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Spangle
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Things have been so hectic and I am making myself do some reviewing tonight because I have so many things going on. Hopefully, my schedule will get better soon. I understand the feelings behind this writing, and yes, people do stare some times and it can make you uncomfortable. I like the comparison you make with X-ray vision. I have always worn sunglasses a lot...maybe subconsciously I am trying to hide. Of course, it might only be that I am way too self-conscious. lol


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
    That is a very interesting review Janet, thank you for sharing.
    The six stars are so welcome and surprising. Thanks for your lovely gesture.

    Ralf
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Raffaelina Lowcock
what an interesting line Sees right through my that is Clark Kent using his x-ray vision to see if a woman is wearing a bra
Clark Kentish? What does Kentish mean.The only thing I can say is Clark Kentish also Super Man?


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
    Right! You made me laugh with the bra thing. LOL
    Thanks for reviewing.

    Ralf

reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Sep-2020
    You are welcome
    Raffaelina Lowcock
    Gert
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Great work. That is an excellent response to the "Picture This" event. That's great artwork to provoke a response, too. I've hear the expression about a man undressing a woman with his eyes. And they don't need those special glasses to do it. Excellent work with your rhyme, too. judi


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    You are right, but I thought the glasses added a 'dimension'.
    Thanks for your wise review. I appreciate your comments.

reply by judiverse on 18-Sep-2020
    You're welcome. "Clark Kentish" is a great title. judi
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Raff,

haahahahahahahaha! What fun! There is so much to love about this poem. It's just so stinking clever - to start with.

Many of us have gone with the 'Superman'-type inspiration for this image, but you took it in a totally unexpected and unique direction -- and I loved it! I'm sorry I don't have sixes.

Thank you!


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Just the thought that you would is enough. I love your review.

    Ralf
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That was quite thought provoking, Ralf. I would hate to have someone invent glasses that could see right through you. How embarrassing that would be. They would know more about you than you do yourself!!! Well done on this wonderful poem, my friend. You met the challenge well. :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Thanks Sandra for your fine review.

    Ralf
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LOL!! What a fun interpretation of the x-ray vision challenge, Ralf -- get to see your demure personality even in your poetry! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;)

It's likes he's watching --> It's like he's watching



 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thanks, Yvette. What would I do without your keen "VISION."

    LOL, I will edit.
    Ralf

reply by Y. M. Roger on 17-Sep-2020
    LOL!! Glad to help, my lady! ;)
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This is a big issue with me. I am uncomfortable with people wearing glasses.You don't see their eyes and you can catch their expression. You seem to be rhyming with effortless ease .
You know what is worse ? Unless you see a walking stick you wont know if he is a blind man !


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Wow, these are big issues you have. Meanwhile, thank you for your review.

    Ralf
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There's no need for a language warning on this one. I was reading, waiting to get to the juicy parts - what a disappointment, haha. Just kidding around. This was fun to read. Hugs, Lou


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you Louise for your review. I'm pleased you found it amusing.
    I know I didn't say anything too drastic, but I inferred.

    Ralf
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This has a nice tongue-in-cheek tone of humor. This is one of my favorite styles of humor. The reader will definitely be drawn in to the experience. Somehow, even in a poem, you were able to elicit emotion, create 3 dimensional characters and a plot. I have to give this A+


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Wonderful analysis. Thank you so much. The six stars are like the icing on the cake. I love your words.
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Wow yeah you described this well, I enjoyed reading it. It's so true that some people do stare a little too much. Your imagery is very vivid and brings the scene to life. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your lively review. I am grateful for your comments.

    Ralf
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