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giovannimariatommaso
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Y.M. nicely done and correct syllable count. I like the message of love's whisper, though still, can still be heard by unencumbered hearts from the cacophony of the world. Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the four stars, G.

reply by giovannimariatommaso on 19-Sep-2020
    Y.M. that was incorrect. It should have been a 5 star and I corrected it. How that happened is beyond me. giovanni

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
    Who knows, G -- you are so very gracious for doing so, sir!! ;) I thought that, perhaps, it just didn't resonate over there. Merci beaucoup, mon ami! ;) Yvette

reply by giovannimariatommaso on 20-Sep-2020
    y/w giovanni
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Nice poem! Thanks for sharing it with us all. Love is most of the times like whispers that change attitudes and open hearts. Even more than a sound shouting, Why? Simple: Because the whispers go directly to heart and are the sounds that our heart detects as our Mother`s whispers while in her body.


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020


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    Wow - thanks so much for your review this evening!

reply by palmart on 18-Sep-2020
    You`re very welcome!! Hope you the best in theh contest!
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Melanie White
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I love the message in this poem as well as the way it's worded. Great job. I definitely thought it was the best poem in the contest, and I voted for it. I hope you win!


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much, Melanie - your review and your vote are so very appreciated!! Be sure to stop in some time after the contest! ;)
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Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the Tetractys Contest writing prompt. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Attractive presentation.

The topic is wonderful...love is the most important thing in life.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020


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    Thank you very much for your review, Gypsy!
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Debra Franze
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These types of poems are difficult to write. You did a great job. I never thought about love and being in love during such a mess of a world. To much focus on the chaos in this World. Nice poem


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020


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    Thank you for your thoughtful review.
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If we can still feel love in the air despite the noisy chaos of life, then we are truly in tune with the good things in life, your words are uplifting and much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020


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    Many thanks for your review.
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a lovely entry for the Tetractys Contest writing prompt. I enjoyed this poem very muck. I hope does well in the contest. Best of luck to you!


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020


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    Many thanks for your review.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 18-Sep-2020
    You're very welcome.
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Susan Louise Gabriel
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Excellent poem based on a specific poetic structure that you followed perfectly. I love the artwork you selected and also the phrase "life's discordant din." It very effectively describes the current tumultuous situations many are going through.


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020


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    Many thanks for your thoughtful review.
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Yes indeed - it is such a good idea to take time to deflect our attention from 'this life's discordant din ' and tune in, as it were, to 'Love's/still voice'


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020


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    Thank you for the thoughtful review.
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A very well-written Tetractys poem about listening to Love's still voice that can only take a few whispers to open the hearts to the silence around and to hear the peace of silence around.


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020


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    Thank you so much!!
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