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Kingsrookviii
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Excellent poem, here. This entire package is spot on, perfect. At first I though I would have used but instead of yet; however, your usage fits nicely and with just the slightest of changes in what is being conveyed. I love language and the subtle nuances. You've done well.


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Oh my goodness - what a wonderful review and those shiny stars are a perfect cap on a very long day!! Thank you for stopping in today and for such lovely comments - may you have a fantastic evening in your corner of the world!
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Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-Good syllable count,
topic, and effective use
of one continuous thought.
-I like the message in your
poem about the importance
of "open hearts" in times
of great discord.
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much for your great comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Sep-2020
    You are quite welcome.
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A lovely tectractys, poem, you've done a wonderful job with this and so relevant to our modern day circumstance, this pandemic has really rattled out collective cage, well done, good luck, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020


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    Thanks for your great comments.

reply by royowen on 17-Sep-2020
    Most welcome
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duchessofdrumborg
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"Listen" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your review.

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 18-Sep-2020

    Dear Anon,
    You're very welcome.
    God bless, take care and keep safe!
    the Duchess
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IndefinitelySmallx
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Beautiful! Wonderful poem and wonderful graphic. I love the format of this type of poem and it has been excellently executed! Good luck with your contest and thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


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    Many thanks for your great comments!
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Janice Canerdy
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Your creatively composed poem uses well-chosen words to speak of love and those who allow it to come in--using personification to convey the power of love.


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your great comments!
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equestrik
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This is a lovely poem and you have chosen a bright and cheerful painting to go with it. Love, it really is what everything comes back to. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    Many thanks for your great comments!
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oliver818
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I like this poem, and enjoyed reading it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used and the last line is very powerful. A discordant din is a lovely way of describing life. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    Many thanks for your great comments!
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Elizabeth Emerald
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Startling and elegant--powerful finale--unburdened by discordant din earns your stars in itself for its imagery and alliteration. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    Many thanks for your great comments!
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