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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "God is Near"

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Mary Kay Bonfante
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Thank you, Tina, for offering kind condolences to Yvonne in the lines of your sweetly rhyming and comforting poem. Like you, I don't know the lovely lady Yvonne especially well, but I think we all know grief, and we know enough about life to realize what a devastating loss she is experiencing. Your beautiful image of the Virgin Mary with her reflection on the peaceful water reminds us of an obedient and godly woman who brought the Son of God into the world, only to watch Him cruelly taken away from her, even as God Himself willingly, and painfully, gave up His Son Jesus for us all, that we might live. And so we will all have the chance to be with the Lord forever, together. This is not the end!


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    That's exactly why I chose that picture! It symbolized Gods plan, which isn't always smooth and easy.
    Thank you for the review and your thoughts:)
    Tina

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 25-Sep-2020
    You're very welcome, Tina. God bless you. - Mary Kay xoxo
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Hi Tina. Wow, were it not for you and this post I would know nothing about daMommy (Yvonne) passing away.

Your consoling message is so inspiring, Tina.
Thank you for writing it. :) Bob


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
    It was her son that passed away. I learned from Helen's post.(lyenochka) I cannot imagine the pain of losing a child.
    Thank you for reading my friend:)
    Tina

reply by Mastery on 23-Sep-2020
    Okay. Thank you. Bob

reply by Mastery on 23-Sep-2020
    Okay. Thank you. Bob

reply by Mastery on 23-Sep-2020
    I thought you already knew I lost my son in a freak accident. See my portfolio if you are interested. From about ten years ago, "Top of the Mountain" Thanks. Bob

reply by Mastery on 23-Sep-2020
    I thought you already knew I lost my son in a freak accident. See my portfolio if you are interested. From about ten years ago, "Top of the Mountain" Thanks. Bob

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    I don't remember you telling me that, but I was processing a lot when I first joined. I would have remembered that though.I will go take a look now:)
    Tina

reply by Mastery on 25-Sep-2020
    Bless you, Tina. :) Bob
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Tina,
I'm sorry some sadness has come Yvonne's family. I hope it is a sadness that soon disappears. Tina, your lovely poem is a beautiful gift to her family.
Blessings,
Cindy


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Cindy. She has become a friend to many on here. Thanks for reading:)
    Tina

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Cindy. She has become a friend to many on here. Thanks for reading:)
    Tina
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A very well-written heartfelt condolences poem to Yvonne and her family who mourns the death if a beloved son. The death if a child is always devastating no matter how old.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    I cannot imagine her pain, so the poem was me hurting for a mom. I know no details other than that. I just wish I could do more.Thank you for reading my poem:)

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    I cannot imagine her pain, so the poem was me hurting for a mom. I know no details other than that. I just wish I could do more.Thank you for reading my poem:)
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This poem, God Is Near, is a very thoughtful and timeless message for Yvonne at this unthinkable time, the loss of a son. Your words flow sweetly and purely to allow the reader to absorb the sentiment and message of hope.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    I like the word absorb. If only I could take some pain from her, I would absorb it. I hurt for her as a mom. Thank you for the stars, Bill:)
    Tina

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    I like the word absorb. If only I could take some pain from her, I would absorb it. I hurt for her as a mom. Thank you for the stars, Bill:)
    Tina
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Your poem speaks eloquently of your loving compassion and thoughtfulness towards Yvonne, and the faith and friendship to be found here on FS. Another dimension is added to poetry when God is invoked through prayer.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    You are right. Theres something "other world-ly" about a prayer in poem form.
    God knows Yvonnes heart and will give her peace eventually. She has been a great friend to me on FS and made me feel very encouraged and welcome here, as everyone has. I feel like FS is another dimension sometimes:)
    Thank you Lisa, for reading my poem to Yvonne.

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    You are right. Theres something "other world-ly" about a prayer in poem form.
    God knows Yvonnes heart and will give her peace eventually. She has been a great friend to me on FS and made me feel very encouraged and welcome here, as everyone has. I feel like FS is another dimension sometimes:)
    Thank you Lisa, for reading my poem to Yvonne.
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I love your prayer/poem for Yvonne, dear Tina. She has a wonderful circle of friends here that love her, and that will make the difference in the days ahead. A sweet offering from your pen, and and so encouraging.
Love,
Sally XOs.....


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you, sweet Sally. It's impossible not to see the love on here. We are blessed. My heart goes out to her hurting mom's heart. She has been incredibly encouraging to me as you have also.
    You're so poetic...offering from my pen:)
    Hugs, Sally!

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you, sweet Sally. It's impossible not to see the love on here. We are blessed. My heart goes out to her hurting mom's heart. She has been incredibly encouraging to me as you have also.
    You're so poetic...offering from my pen:)
    Hugs, Sally!
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I quite enjoyed your poem/ prayer. As a believer where two or more agree...Matt 18:19... it will be done. May God comfort the hearts of all involved. Veenbee


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    I love this message. It shows what friends really are on here. We are more than two...what a blessing!
    Thanks Veenbee
    Tina

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    I love this message. It shows what friends really are on here. We are more than two...what a blessing!
    Thanks Veenbee
    Tina
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I'm sure Yvonne will appreciate your tribute to her, and the heartfelt labour an concern, the way you've spent the time, the absolute effort and skill that you've spent in the process. This beautifully written dear friend, and how she would appreciate it. Beautifully written an crafted in tetrameter and aabbcc sestets, well done, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Roy. God gave me the words when I needed them:)
    Your rev iui ew and comments mean a lot!
    Tina

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Roy. God gave me the words when I needed them:)
    Your rev iui ew and comments mean a lot!
    Tina

reply by royowen on 20-Sep-2020
    He sure does

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    :)
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Dear Tina, Thank you for writing to Yvonne too!
Your words of sympathy and faith will help I know.
Knowing that her FanStory family will still be around, long after the relatives have gone, will do more to help her heal than anything else.

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Fanstory friends are so special. Yvonne has really encouraged me, being newish on here. She will need prayer for quite awhile. I cant imagine her feelings right now...Thanks for reviewing her poem:)
    Tina

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Fanstory friends are so special. Yvonne has really encouraged me, being newish on here. She will need prayer for quite awhile. I cant imagine her feelings right now...Thanks for reviewing her poem:)
    Tina
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