Take Your Burdens to Jesus
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Love Heals


An answer to the world's problems

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Jeffrey Mitchell
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Love is a action. Your poem is very beautiful, but I don't feel the love of this world. Being a man of color has me questioning life. I'm not blaming the whole world, but life is short enough, why should I have to "question" those who suppose to protect and serve ! Any way thank you.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    I feel your pain and I do feel people of color have been mistreated. Just remember, there are still good cops in the world, as there are many good people. I pray you meet loving people who will restore your hope. Thank you for reviewing a poem with few points. I haven't posted in awhile.
    Have a great weekend. Stay safe!
    Tina
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Tina, That is the key to the world's problem. Jesus is love and He is what we need. When we show love to each other instead of hate and violence then I think the world would be a much better place to be in. Thanks for sharing. love you, Teri


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
    Thank you for reviewing my little poem.You are so right about the source of love, Jesus!
    Tina
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Absolutely 100% in agreement with you on this. Unfortunately, it appears to be a commodity of which there is a massive shortfall in recent times. That, in my opinion, is why we find ourselves where we are.

Great entry for the contest, best of luck. Craig


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Craig, I agree with you...it's a famine of enormous proportion! Love is scarce and people are dying for it.
    Thank you for reviewing my little poem:)
    Tina

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Craig, I agree with you...it's a famine of enormous proportion! Love is scarce and people are dying for it.
    Thank you for reviewing my little poem:)
    Tina
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Love Heals
by Tina Crute

Hello, Tina,

Excellent entry for the
6 Word Poetry contest. You say so much with six words.. it's great. I'm a big fan of short poetry. I agree with you. Love is the answer. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    I am liking short poetry more and more. Its harder to write I think, and say what you feel, but I like the challenge. Thank you so so much for you nice review:)
    Tina
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Great job with your six word poem that carries a powerful message of truth. The word "world" can also be taken in two ways to give it even more meaning. Thanks for sharing your creativity and positive messages!
Bill


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Bill for the awesome review and encouraging comments!
    Ive been online chatting with an insurance company for over 3 hours, so I came on here while I am on hold again, so this is a welcome surprise! We DO need a world( lots and lots)of help to heal:)
    Tina
    Tina
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Your six word poem says it all. Remember the Beatles song, All We Need Is Love? The words still ring true but I'm afraid our present day world has gone way past love and turned so much of it into hate! Maybe some day people will learn. Great poem!
Patty


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Patty,
    I will go back and attach that song to my poem maybe. I am on the phone with an insurance company for hours, so I will make a note to do that tonight. Thank you for mentioning that and for reading my poem:)
    Tina

reply by Patty Palmer on 24-Sep-2020
    You're welcome!
    Patty
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Oh, it most certainly does, Lady Tina! :) ;) Such a meaningful offering for this extremely limited contest, my lady -- thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Yvette! Lady Tina, lol...I sound like a very important person!
    Hugs, Yvette!
    Tina
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Brilliant six word poem! Perfect for this day and time as we see the hatred on the news daily. We here it in the words spoken by co-workers, family and friends. It's all over facebook and any other social network. God is the key to love, as he love us unconditionally. I certainly hope those in need of Jesus find him before it's to late.
God bless
Steve


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    I responded to this in a message but thank you so very much! I love the unconditional love emphasis in your review. That really can change our world...no conditions to love! If you dont write a poem on that, I will. Unconditional s a powerful word:)
    Tina

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    I responded to this in a message but thank you so very much! I love the unconditional love emphasis in your review. That really can change our world...no conditions to love! If you dont write a poem on that, I will. Unconditional s a powerful word:)
    Tina

reply by Neonewman on 24-Sep-2020
    My pleasure, and I look forward to seeing your piece using Unconditional.

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    haha. Okay, now I need to do it!
    Rough day today, but will do it soon!
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Yes, this is true. Healing must begin with the world's believing in God's love--and praying to be blessed with the kind of love hearts must have to make the world better. I do NOT like giving a 4, but you have seven words.

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much for your comment. I fixed it. Somewhere between the paper and computer I messed up the exact wording!
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Dear Tina, I would like to bookcase this poem and picture!
The six simple words written here, and captured within a heart,
needs to be printed out on a poster, and placed on every doorstep and passed out like candy at Halloween to those we meet as we go about our day.
Just to remind us, that the message that it bares will save us, no matter what happens to us, in the days to come.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Wow! Thank you for the stars! They light up this rainy day we are having. I really appreciate your comments too and I will take that under advisement, seriously. It would be a good thing for people to be reminded of :-)
    I appreciate your kind review!
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