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Acute Connections

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amada
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"my ears vibrate with your gentle timbre..." a very beautiful line embracing the hearing senses, a very dramatic sense that sometimes we forget about it. I celebrate that you wrote about it. I wish you the best in the contest.


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much.
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Reese Turner
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Certainly a thought provoking picture with words which invite all kinds of fantasies! I have miles to drive today and your work will keep me company. Thanks!


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thank you for this kind validation travel safe.
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This sweetly romantic piece is fully compliant with the septolet form as described. It is sometime since I have seen one of these. Perhaps the contest will stir up renewed interest in the form


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thanks teacher! I enjoyed the challenge of yet another poetic writing style, see you next week!

reply by Pantygynt on 25-Sep-2020
    ;))
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Ignatius Albright
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Whilst this is a beautiful poem it is not in fact a septolet. I encouragge you to reveiw the rules for the contest and perhaps rewrite a 14 word poem to enter before you are disqualified. Much love, Ignatius A

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    THANK S MUCH BUT I DO HAVE A FOURTEEN WORD POEM Much love back
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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Love makes the world go around. That is one of the first things I remember mother telling me when I was a wee child. This is a lovely poem.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Rebecca, thank you for the review.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 25-Sep-2020
    You're very welcome.
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This poem was a nice way of describing the sound of the person that you love voice. Put into words like this sounds fantastic to me. Awesome Job Writer!


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Rashanna, thank you!
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Well chosen words for this very brief form to show us that with the "acute connections" these loving whispers can affect the narrator. The words are not only heard but felt. Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thanks for the good wishes.
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Dear Mystery Writer,

I think this poem touches on an issue that isn't talked about as much. The SOUND our loved ones make. *smile*

My hubby and I have been together now for over 30 years, but the sound of his voice still makes me smile - it brings comfort and peace ad security. He's my guy. *smile*

So I understood this really well, I think. It's a nice entry - sharing a message in just a few words. Thanks and good luck~


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Robyn, having enjoyed the lilt in my brides voice for 37 years, I do relate, and thank you!
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Melissa Russell Deur
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Well done. You've made good use of the senses--I feel the vibration in the ear and the warm breath. I really like "warm words" instead of "warm breath" because that creates another layer of meaning. It's more compelling and romantic than "hot words." Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Melissa, thanks.

reply by Melissa Russell Deur on 25-Sep-2020
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Your Septolet is very well crafted and engages the reader immediately. I enjoyed reading it and appreciate the deft hand of the poet in writing it. Well done and good luck.

Melissa


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you dear friend!
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