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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Bullet And Nappy"

Childhood memories about Guyana

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Sheila Golding
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Yes , this is great, love hearing your stories. I almost feel like I'm there. Some of the actions seem cruel, the boiling water and pushing a child into a septic tank but I guess these things happen. Loved the story, good luck ???


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Yes, no one would want to be pushed into a septic tank, but these are minds of children. They don't think consequences. As far as the boiling water, even as a child it seemed harsh but we depended on the elder to do whatever kept us safe, whether we understood it or not. Thanks again for your review. Veenbee

reply by Sheila Golding on 25-Sep-2020
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This is an interesting chapter, and even if is representing reality I'm not a fun of dog fights I know sometimes you need to hurt some to protect others.


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your review. Yes the dog fights happened often at any time. That was the last dog fight I witnessed since the ring leader was killed.
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I can remember the dog fights, and the same method of breaking them up, only it wasn't boiling water, it was cold, boiling water would have done a lot of damage, unfortunate about the child in the sewage tank, a fortunate for you Vee, well done, always interesting, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Thank you Roy

reply by royowen on 22-Sep-2020
    Well done
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I like what you write in here, besides, I would like everyone who likes Nat King Cole songs. Do you remember "Nature Boy?' Somehow tears flow down my cheeks when I hear it. But anyway, I loved the totality of your story.


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your review. I never heard of Nature Boy, but listening now. Very nice. Veenbee
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This essay or non-fiction about collection of memories is fantastically dimensional, structured, organized and written with a good beginning and a nice conclusion; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Thank you
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