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At the cross roads


5-7-5 poem.

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And it happens so often in life - the road can be smooth for a while, then coming the cross-roads. I enjoyed your artistic presentation, visuals and artwork. The visuals conjure up delightful images in a reader's minds - I like the happy light aura emanating from the poem.

Thank you for sharing.


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    Thank you very much.
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Very clever 5-7-5, Sanku. Any crossroads in life are cause and justification to make decisions that will most likely affect our lives forevermore. Good job on this, my friend. everything about it, including the artwork is a plus for the overall presentation. Good luck with it. :) Bob


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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
    Thank you Bob.

reply by Mastery on 28-Sep-2020
    :) Bob

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    :) Bob
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At the cross roads
by Sanku

Hello, Sanka,

The proverbial cross roads. Great 5/7/5. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. Well done.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



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    Thank you very much
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Life is like taking a trip. It's fun and smooth sailing as long as the road signs are clear, but the trouble starts once you hit the cross roads and can't decide which road to take. Beautiful picture that enhances your poem!
Patty


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for your thought provoking comments.
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this thoughtful symbolic poem. Yes, life is so easy when all is going our way and there are no tough decisions to make. Then--the "crossroads"!


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



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Crossroads on country lanes can be scenes of great disasters in history as no one expects there to be another car coming. Or maybe the crossroad here is a change of direction and a metaphor for life, whichever it is I enjoyed the suggestion, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much .Thank you especially for giving a new point -cross roads being a danger point. I had only the problem of choice in my mind.
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Your 575 is in good form--correct number of syllables per line. Your image is a good pairing with your descriptive words, too. The lines read smoothly with a strong message of how life twists and turns just when one believes everything is going great.
Thanks for sharing/
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much.
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An interesting dichotomy between the straight and smooth road that requires no decision and a cross roads that requires the traveler to decide - left or right? A good subject for this type of poem.
Well done!


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020



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This picture shows the he straight smooth path in the beginning of the poem. But the choice at the crossroads is the choice of safety or risk.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020



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    Thank you very much.

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    You are most kindly welcome.
    dp
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Your wording is simple. But the meaning in the words bring what we all experience life can be simple and then problems or life decisions that can change or disrupt the road we laid out for ourselves.
Good job and enjoyed your words.


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020



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