Ohhh... love the ending scene. I knew this would be good when Mak asked Serria out. They're perfect for each other. She definitely needs to know him better. :) And I can relate with not being able to find clothing the right size! Especially pants, they're usually too short. The length in this chapter was... you know I won't mention it anymore because obviously you've got it down. I can't wait to see what's next for Serria and Mak, and if Keur, his aunt, and his friends will get help off the planet!
Serria is asked out to dinner by Mak and knows he wants her to wear something like a dress, but she can't find anything so calls her friend Alyci who referred her to friend Charly who knew her way around. Dressed and "armed" she now sees Mak and has a fabulous time, especially the kiss. Well done Karlene, characters are easy to understand, blessings Roy
Hello KRPRICE, a wonderful Thursday to you, I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing this chapter of your story. I usually skip stories if I don't catch them in the first few chapters. I'm glad I decided to read this one, hopefully if I can get caught up on everything else that has backed up due to covid maybe I can read it from the beginning, however that's a big if. Anyway good job and have a good day.