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Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Request for help, Part 1"

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Ohhh... love the ending scene. I knew this would be good when Mak asked Serria out. They're perfect for each other. She definitely needs to know him better. :) And I can relate with not being able to find clothing the right size! Especially pants, they're usually too short. The length in this chapter was... you know I won't mention it anymore because obviously you've got it down. I can't wait to see what's next for Serria and Mak, and if Keur, his aunt, and his friends will get help off the planet!


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your review and great rating.

    Karlene

reply by AJ McCall on 26-Sep-2020
    You're welcome!
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Nice easy chapter to read. I liked the characters and the date. You did a great job and I didn't find any errors. Looking forward to reading more. Shirley


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your review and great rating.

    Karlene
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Serria is asked out to dinner by Mak and knows he wants her to wear something like a dress, but she can't find anything so calls her friend Alyci who referred her to friend Charly who knew her way around. Dressed and "armed" she now sees Mak and has a fabulous time, especially the kiss. Well done Karlene, characters are easy to understand, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your review and great rating.

    Karlene

reply by royowen on 25-Sep-2020
    Welcome
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Hello KRPRICE, a wonderful Thursday to you, I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing this chapter of your story. I usually skip stories if I don't catch them in the first few chapters. I'm glad I decided to read this one, hopefully if I can get caught up on everything else that has backed up due to covid maybe I can read it from the beginning, however that's a big if. Anyway good job and have a good day.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your review and great rating.

    Karlene
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I like and have enjoyed the read, easy and dramatic taletelling, soft and impressive plot development, catchy beginning, curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your review and great rating.

    Karlene
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