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Down to earth simplicity

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This is a lovely poem dedicated to your wife. As always, very well written - the words are lovely. Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect and the whole is a lovely read. You can still dream Jaybird and she will be in your dreams. Warm regards Dorothy x


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


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Oh dear, what a beautiful and yet heart-wrenching piece of writing! I'm sorry for your loss, this is a beautiful poem in tribute to your lost loved one.
Thank you for sharing. keep writing and keep safe, Ignatius A


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


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I love your Sonnet. You are good at it and I can tell that you are missing your wife who passed away. You have shared many memories about her here. She has turned into your poetry muse or maybe she has always been one for you.
Well done.


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In my opinion, a lovely romantic poem, a tribute to one's deceased beloved, narrated in earnest longing for something that can still be, in the warm blanket of dream filled sleep...


 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020


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Hello Jake,
That's what dreams are for, to bring the impossible back to life
if only for a moment in our dreams.
A very well written poem with exact rhymes that reads smoothly,
just like the dream itself.
Best wishes to you.
Robert



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I believe you are talking about your wife, and how you miss the precious time spent walking together. In your mind you relive, those memories, to keep her near to you until eternity will reunite the true love of your..Life.


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Poignant tribute to your wife--well rendered in fine rhythm and rhyme--virtual walk--apt and clever--I like that you state your piece without obscure imagery and metaphor. Cheers. LIZ


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A very wistful poem focused on the wish to have a few extra minutes with a loved one who has passed on. Impossible of course, but nice to dream about.

Lovely rhythmic flow and sweet rhyming.

Steve


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Jaybird1,
I always look forward to your beautiful writing and this poem did not disappoint me.
It reminds me of my Dad and his longing for my mom.
This poem is one of longing but of companionship and love.
Well done my friend.


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This is a beautiful piece of writing right from start to finish. Great rhyming scheme and nice flow. Love your wording very beautiful. If you could walk again with me I know it would be virtually. We'd walk the paths so often trod, known by us and our chosen god. We'd walk along a peaceful stream, where long ago we shared our dream. Very nicely done.


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020


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