This is a lovely poem dedicated to your wife. As always, very well written - the words are lovely. Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect and the whole is a lovely read. You can still dream Jaybird and she will be in your dreams. Warm regards Dorothy x
Oh dear, what a beautiful and yet heart-wrenching piece of writing! I'm sorry for your loss, this is a beautiful poem in tribute to your lost loved one.
Thank you for sharing. keep writing and keep safe, Ignatius A
I love your Sonnet. You are good at it and I can tell that you are missing your wife who passed away. You have shared many memories about her here. She has turned into your poetry muse or maybe she has always been one for you.
That's what dreams are for, to bring the impossible back to life
if only for a moment in our dreams.
A very well written poem with exact rhymes that reads smoothly,
just like the dream itself.
Best wishes to you.
I believe you are talking about your wife, and how you miss the precious time spent walking together. In your mind you relive, those memories, to keep her near to you until eternity will reunite the true love of your..Life.
I always look forward to your beautiful writing and this poem did not disappoint me.
It reminds me of my Dad and his longing for my mom.
This poem is one of longing but of companionship and love.
Well done my friend.
This is a beautiful piece of writing right from start to finish. Great rhyming scheme and nice flow. Love your wording very beautiful. If you could walk again with me I know it would be virtually. We'd walk the paths so often trod, known by us and our chosen god. We'd walk along a peaceful stream, where long ago we shared our dream. Very nicely done.