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This reminded me of the son Hotel California, you can ck out any time you like but you can't ever leave. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thanks for the encouragement. You stay safe as well.
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I like and have enjoyed the read, the state and vibrating horror and thrilling taletelling; progressive plot development, the realistic and contributory dialogues foster thematic maturation; good beginning and horror in curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Your comments are greatly appreciated. Thanks and stay well.
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Wow, scary Mary, this story gave me the chilly image of a future that will not be pink. No matter how much we try to ignore it its catching up with us. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thanks for your comments. I'm glad it filled the bill for a horror story.
    Stay well.
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Hmm, it seems a lot like district 99. Given this was unknown it makes you question why he went up there with suck a flimsy suit. But, I get that is part of the story. It looks solid for a rough draft. It certainly has the cringe factor, but I think you are looking to teach a message too. If so, the cringe overwhelms it.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Not really trying teach as much to scare. So, I guess the cringe factor was what I was looking for. Thanks for your comments. Stay well.
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