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Prayer Power


Put our hands together and Pray for America

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This poem, Prayer Power, has a loop quality and provides a message of battling despair with hope and violence with the peace which surpasses all understanding.


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
    Hi Bill, Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
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A very well-written linked-refrain about the power in prayer when we do not know which way to go and finding hope to fulfil our dreams and find God's grace.


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
    Sandra, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my linked refrain poem.
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I think you and so many others feel the same and want things to improve and for hearts to be at peace, for rage to quell to restore hopes and dreams, this is a powerful write, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much for your time taken to read and comment on my poem.
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I like this call to prayer, Jim. You did a really good job presenting the ultimate authority of God and how we can turn to him in prayer. My fave line... A lightning bolt of change through deep prayer.". Well done!

Melissa


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
    My dear friend thank you for the validation! I look forward to class this week!
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Great job with you linked refrain, JLR! You are always one of the first to give the new Potlatch form a try. I do like your call to prayer and to unity during these times of "fear and rage" shown on the news daily.

a storm that destroys peoples hopes and dreams! (people's)


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
    lyenochka, thank you for your time read and review my linked refrain. I admit, I approached this challenge with trepidation, so you kind words are motivating.
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Dear JLR, your poem speaks Volumes. the illustration you attached (made of glass) shows how fragile are the prayers we utter against the forces of evil that we must face.
I know I should comment on the merits of your linked refrain, But it is hardly noticed because of the the words that fill the frame of that poetic dance.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
    Suzanna, I appreciate you saw the intended metaphor with the glass hands lifted up in prayer. The fragileness of these times, and the words we put forth for change are in much need to the Highest and Best
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I like your drawing, first of all. it paints a liquid and translucent image, like the one color we would need to survive this time. Lightness come from the Almighty as well. Great poem.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020



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    Amada, thank you for your validation, be well...be very well!
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...this is really, really beautiful and touching.
Your whole poem flows beautifully-but that is not what I like about it. It's filled with truth, with encouragement that I think, a lot of people need right now. Prayer IS a very important rule in our life. Prayer helps us give our troubles to God, helps us-the world, have healing.
This is an excellent poem JLR, thank you for sharing!
TommyWrites~


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020



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    Tommy, I an honored by your words and validation. I join with you in sending prayers of Peace, tolerance and acceptance. Thank you.
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Fear or rage on our part is destructive. There is way more power in prayer than we can even imagine. We must take hold as a group, and let God's power shine through us.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    I delight that we bind hands in this topic, I send abundant love to you ! Thank you for this six-star validation.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 27-Sep-2020
    You're quite welcome!
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This poem speaks the power of prayer; let Americans stand together without causing harm to others and pray God for peace and grace; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    My dear friend, thank you for your prayers in Union with us who seek Peace.
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