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Ode to All


a 5-7-5

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Aw, Bill, thank you for the ode. I think this is the first ode written in my honor (and everyone else). I love the approach that you have taken with this contest. I can see why it placed in the contest. Congratulations!


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    Thanks, PF
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This was a funny little poem to read. It is a bit of a tongue twister which only adds to the delight. I can see my son-in-law going around saying this just for fun.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2020



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    Thanks, Mia
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It is great to read a happy and uplifting poem. Your poem is one of encouragement. We need more encouraging poems in today's world and I wish you well in the contest.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2020



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    Thanks, m
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You followed the rules and wrote an excellent ode for the contest. Your illustration pairs well and sets the stage for your words. This is very nicely done.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2020



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    Thanks, roof
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All the men and women working the front line. Doctors, nurses, paramedics, police, firefighters definitely deserve it with all they have to go through. You know if more people sang praises instead of hate this world would be a better place to live.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2020



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    Thanks, MD
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I enjoyed reading your interesting Ode poem. It's a bit simple with a hint of humor. Your artwork choice is interesting, as well. Best wishes in the contest.


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    Thanks, angel
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Hello anonymous

Interesting entry for the Ode 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. You repeat words too many times. You only have 17 words to create a clear message, to write same word 3 and 4 times is just lazy. I recommend a rewrite. Something like this...

this hand's for you man

and other people out there

all swell folks as well

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    Thanks, GBR. I understand your critique.
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A round of applause for those special people that fill our lives with joy and you paid homage to everyone here, much enjoyed, food for thought, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2020



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    Thanks, Dolly
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I like how you are all inclusive in your ode, truly to all. I like your wordplay also. that is one of my literary techniques. You even have a fun dialectal touch. You did a swell job. I am voting for this one.


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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    Thanks, Liz
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I feel included with the "you two, too!" Nice to give an ode to everybody. Now if only everyone would just be willing to be more cooperative and give that same kind of laud to one another. Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    I'm glad that this gets to people who know they are appreciated.
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