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One line love poem

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Mistydawn
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What a well-written poem. So warm, heartfel using so few words. I'd say she's a very lucky lady to have such unconditional love like that. Good luck with your contest.


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Thank you Misty.
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Raffaelina Lowcock
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How clever. The vibes would be the electricity in the air. What a lovely thing to say. The depth of meaning is so blatant and present in every word. Well done.

Ralf


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Thank you Ralf for your time and review. Have a great day!
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Good Morning from India. Good to see your writing after long. Such simple words and so deep meaning. it's a rare talent. Well done. Will be waiting for more from you.


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Thank you Anuradha. How are Misty and Valkrim? LOL Don't know if I spelled his name right.

reply by Anuradha Dev on 07-Oct-2020
    Lol. Well, I am trying to publish the story. so working a lot on Mishti and VIKRAM(correct spelling, but it's okay) at the moment.
    Thanks to you and many readers on fan story who gave me the confidence to dream that I can publish the book.
    I am good, hope you are good and keeping safe.
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This is a very well worded and very sweet One Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good loving words that would woo any normal girls heart. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Teri


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Thank you
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Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Roddy--really I am, but sorry to say, I'm not for you. I--err--not aimed at me, is it? Here's where I say never mind and stop digging the hole I'm in any deeper!


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    LOL. Have you been fitted for that straight jacket yet?
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I enjoyed your one line poem. I like the internal rhyme. Your message is well-stated. Love knows no boundaries in cases such as this.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Thank you Jan.
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Michael Ludwinder
 
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I liked this. I think with one line you have said quite a lot. I could hear this whispered to her at the right moment and I think the result would be powerful. Very creative and well written.


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your review, much appreciated.
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