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A Practical Solution


Eating made easy

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You had me there. I looked at it and said "doesn't he mean a fork?
So I had to look it up and there is a word Knork.
Live and learn but that may have been your intention.
Good job. One line poems are not easy.


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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Mary, for taking time to puzzle over my one liner. Your review is much appreciated.
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A very pragmatic suggestion--unless one is partial to soup, I guess.
Still, I'm all for minimizing. I guess I could always eat my soup with a straw.

Best of luck with the Committee.

Peace, Lee


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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you for taking the trouble to read my one liner. If soup is your main dish perhaps a spraw would be useful....... I am just imagining a metal straw with a spoon attached in case there are solid particles in the soup!!
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Yup, i heard this new miracle tool somewhere, indeed practical:"

Minimise your cutlery, just use a knork." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest. Just one small correction, if you don't mind, should thie verb not be minimize?


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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Iza, for your thoughtful review. I did a check on that spelling. Minimise and minimize are both acceptable, the former predominantly used in UK ( where I reside) and the latter in the USA.
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