Contact Us | En español    
         Join today or login

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login

Contests

Share A Story In A Poem
Deadline: In 2 Days

2-4-2 Poetry
Deadline: In 3 Days

Nonet Poetry Contest
Deadline: In 5 Days

True Story Flash
Deadline: Dec 7th

5-7-5 Poetry
Deadline: Dec 10th


Writing Classes

0 classes available. Click here locate a class and to learn more.

Rank

Poet: None
Author: None
Novel: None
Reviewer:None
Votes: None






Reviews from
A Sound Identified


It was his first visit to the seaside

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
AnnieDawn
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  111 (+1)
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  132
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  33
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Children come up with the most amazing comments and questions. I am always ready to laugh at the things that my grand kids say. This post is so unique and I love it. Very good for the 20 word contest and should do well. Great job.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
    Your warm, empathetic review is much appreciated. Thank you, Annie. That kid was actually my youngest son. We, many years ago, had made a long car trip from Zimbabwe to the coast in RSA. It was dark when we arrived and our young man was asleep in the back of the vehicle.
Comment by
RodG
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  66
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  45
Review Stars
  Rank:  68
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
There is something wondrous about witnessing a child's discovery. It brings back all OUR memories. I applaud your subtle use of rhyme in this 20-word poem. Rod


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
    Thank you,Rod , for a great review. My memory was certainly triggered as the child to whom I referred was my young son.
  -1-   Next Page 


Market your book.
Advertising options.
Football Chapter 5 part 2
A mother faces life's struggles.


Share or Bookmark
  Contact Us | En español | Advertise With Us

© 2015 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy