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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Of the Story"

Romance in a world of magic.

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Comment by
Shirley McLain
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I think this chapter is setting the reader up for problems with Marchand. You did a great job and I did enjoy the reading of your chapter. Have a wonderful day. Shirley


 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it. Have a wonderful day yourself!
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AnnieDawn
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A nice chapter that keeps the reader with a smooth flow through the story. I enjoyed the content and the characters are well defined within the story. Really well written. I have two suggestions.

Every time she felt the urge to close the distance rear its head, she looked elsewhere.(Sentence needs revision. It is confusing when read.)

That is a sight that to strike awe and dread into any who witness it."(Another confusing sentence.)















































































 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
    Thanks for the review. I?ll look at fixing those. Thanks for spotting them!
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