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Appeal to Greater Powers


Not a fan of the winter months...

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w.j.debi
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Oh, traction is the one thing I don't like about winter. Picking just the right shoes is so difficult. I agree with your pleas to spare up the from the wind and the cold and falling!!


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    LOL!! Yeah, I DO NOT the cold weather or anything that goes along with it! ;) Thanx for stopping in (again - good to see you!!)... ;) Yvette
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Good afternoon to you, Yvette

This is such a fun write and rather apt given your chosen profession :)

You did make me smile.


much love

tracey


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Oh, good!! Glad to hear that smile..... I really DO NOT like the cold weather... ;) :) Thanx for the review, my lady! ;) Yvette
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Hello Yvette.

I don't participate in blind entry contests anymore and haven't participated in a site contest in about a month.

I don't see blind entry contest since I don't get in that deal.

I make my post every week and that's about it. This is a funny one. One thing I don't want to lose in the winter is my traction.

Z


 Comment Written 12-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    LOL!! I just hate cold weather from beginning to end, Z!! ;) :) I actually enjoy the 'blinds' cuz folks don't know it's me (sortof self-evident, I know, but it's actually a draw for me...) ;) :) Thanx for the review, sir, and take care! ;) Yvette

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Oct-2020
    Hello Yvette.

    I haven't been on here much because Internet problems are plaguing me. You're welcome.

    Z

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LOL, uh, yesssss! This is NOT funny (yes it is) because I am one who has to live with all that white stuff almost half the year. Best of luck in the booth with this one. Adorable!


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2020



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    I cannot stand the cold weather... for this and just the fact that it's cold!! ;) :) LOL! ;) Thanx for stopping in! ;) Yvette
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LOL The picture says it all! How many times I've landed on my behind on the ice and snow. It's very embarrassing especially when you can't get back up by yourself! And a picture is worth a thousand words!
Patty


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    I am NOT a fan of winter! ;) ;) LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review here, my lady! ;) Yvette
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Sometimes, we see the half-glass full of water and forget to remember about the other (the empty one). But reality teaches us that the part that we forget to see (or consider) exists and is as present as the full one. Similarly, Winter may have a nice face (with snowmen) but sometimes people suffer from the "hardest" side of winter. Your poem tells how painful it could be for our bodies to check the hardness of ice water..


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    🌞Thank you 👍

reply by palmart on 10-Oct-2020
    You´re welcome!
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Hello anonymous

Great entry for the Ode To Winter writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the alliteration of T. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020



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    🌞Thank you. 👍
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There is always a bit of trepidition for me when winter shows itself. I live where we get a fair bit of snow and with my long commute to and from work, I am grateful for traction!


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020



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    🌞 Thank you! 👍
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A very well-written ode to winter that may bring wind and cold with snow which many prefer not to receive when they slip on the slippery snow.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020



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    🌞Thank you! 👍
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This is an unique entry for the Ode to Winter Contest. Your illustration pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. I like the closing line, "Take not our traction." Nicely done.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020



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    🌞Thank you!👍
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