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Appeal to Greater Powers


Not a fan of the winter months...

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Cynthia Adams1
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This is a cute and well-done poem.
The artwork, of course, is very good and appropriate. My body reacted a bit negatively to the art though, as I've fallen in recent years. :)

I thought this to be a strong poem if it is being entered in a contest. (It's still strong even if its not for a contest.) We are allowed so few words in these formats and I thought your choices were especially good.
My only question is: Do we fall because of the snow or because of the ice?


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    The snow becomes the ice due to the melting/re-freeze process, so it's up to you how technical you'd like to take a simple 5-7-5. 8-) 8-) Thank you for your review.
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Oh my goodness! The moment before bones break and bruises appear on this poor soul! This is always my biggest fear with ice and snow so I bought myself a pair of boots with spikes! A fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


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    🌞Thank you!👍
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Very clever--take not our traction--earns your stars in itself! I'm with you on winter insofar as the ice--snow itself I can deal with. Cute title. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ


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    🌞Thank you 👍
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I don't know why but i find the picture funny, nice job. An attention getting title, I thought it will be a spiritual poetry. a short yet well written piece of poetry

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 Comment Written 08-Oct-2020



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    🌞Thank you 👍
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Mary Vigasin
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I love this wording. It reminds me of the greatest fear I have in making my way around during the winter- slipping, sliding and falling.
To me this is the real Ode to Winter.
Very clever and creative.
good luck in the contest.
Regards
Mary

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    🌞Thank you.👍
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