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Big City Bird Watching


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Love how your words are from the viewpoint of the pigeons. I often observe the pigeons when I am in a city and they are quite the characters.
"Buildings, bridges and by-ways" draws the reader into your poem. You have a delicious use of words that makes this a poem to read aloud.


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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thanx so much for the lovely review, Elaine! ;) I enjoy these 'learning while poeting' contests! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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Very nice overall presentation for this obscure word contest. It is doubtful that word will ever get into my conversation. The word should be 'pigeonteronic'! LOL

Regardless you created an interesting vision of these frequent city dwellers in just a few words.

Best wishes in the contest voting.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    Thank you for your encouraging review, Mark.
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especially if you're a statue. I like the originality and humor of this one - in addition to the fact that you added a new word to my vocabulary. Good luck in the contest.


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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Mark, for your wonderful review - glad you found a smile!
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A very well-written 7-9-7 obscure word poem about the pigeons in the city sitting anywhere where they can watch the city dwellers going by endlessly.


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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Sandra, for your review this morning!
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You have made excellent use of the required syllables in this vividly descriptive, delightful piece. The alliteration is an appealing bonus; the artwork made me smile.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Janice, for your encouaging review this morning!
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Wow this is awesome. If you live in a big city you know the pigeons. They wake you up in the early morning. My sister calls them rats with wings.. i like them though.. ima go pigeon watching downtown tomorrow. I can't pronounce the word yet, but now i know it. Excellent poem, writer.


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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    So appreciate your encouraging review!
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Fascinating! I didn't know that peristeronic would be the adjective for pigeon. I thought it would be more like columbine. Thanks for sharing and what a great picture. Pigeons know how to make the most of city life!


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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    So appreciate your encouraging review!
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I love that word and we are inspired by so many sights and these birds are the watchers in the towns as they command the skies and observe us, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    So appreciate your encouraging review!
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Cool word!--nice work with BBB alliteration--I'm impressed you refrained from temptation to write about what pigeons are infamous for. Clever bit--good luck. Cheers. LIZ


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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    Lol! So appreciate your encouraging review!
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I like the way you wrote your poem .It sounds so INTELLIGENT , which is funny because they say pigeons aren't .Love the way you made an every day occasion seem like it was something special

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 Comment Written 08-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    So appreciate your encouraging review!

reply by Carmen Ducharme on 09-Oct-2020
    My pleasure God Bless
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