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I always find a walk in the forest increases my faith..
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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "No sign of the Lady"

The lady's escape becomes a countrywide search

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Ben B.
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Isn't Fantasia the name of a Disney film? Other than that I liked this story, a very classic fairy tale setting here. Oh and I love my ale so put it in a mug ???


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    Thank you for stopping by with your critic. lol It could be a Disney film. It's be a long time since I watched a Disney movie. I'll check it...I can always change it in the book. Thanks!
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A well written first paragraph, the sense of urgency is thick. A well written and interesting plotline. I like how you describe the character situation and action


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
    Thank you for taking the time to review Chapter 7. I enjoyed creating it. Do stop by again.
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