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Tree Lobster


A Peppered Pickle

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Dolly,
I like this peppered pickle.
A very short, yet sweet poem.
Your drawing is nice, Dolly,
I wish more animals would not be endangered species.
Maybe scientists can learn more about this species.
Best wishes,
Cindy


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
    Thank you Cindy for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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There is no end to the different insects in this world. This one is rather unique in its form that resembles the lobster. It is enigmatic when you say they came back from the dead.

Ralf


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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
    Thank you Raffaelina for your review, glad you enjoyed this little guy, love Dolly x
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I'm always amused--and usually delighted--when I hear a news story with a message like the one in your poem. Sometimes species thought extinct for centuries turn up somewhere. Your poem is skillfully-written and enthusiastic.


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
    Thank you Janice for your review, glad you smiled at this one, love Dolly x
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This is an interesting non-extinction story in a poem comprised of six lines in the Peppered Pickle. It sounds like the bugs are free to bug the world yet again. I wonder how many animals or creatures have been noted as extinct but reappeared years later. Fun share.


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
    Thank you Crystie for your review, yes it is a good feeling to find that this guy is not extinct, they survived, love Dolly x
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WOW...what a fascinating discovery. It is always so sad when we learn that a species has become extinct. The zoo in St. Louis has a cheetah breeding program that is very successful. I also read before that polar bears are no longer on the danger list. However, I fear for the survival of a lot of other species. This really is a difficult world for all creatures. xo Janet


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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
    Thank you Janet for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, I have learned so much about these insects, love Dolly x
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Dolly, This is a very interesting and well written Peppered Pickle poem about the Tree Lobster. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from your art work. Thank you for sharing. love, Teri


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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
    Thank you Teri for your review, glad you enjoyed this peppered pickle, love Dolly x
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They are one ugly insect! It would have been better if they had stayed dead! Do they bite or cause disease? I suppose God created everybody and everything so if He wants them alive, so be it! Pretty good drawing too.
Luv!
Patty


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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
    He may be ugly, but he is a survivor Patty, I appreciate your review, love Dolly x
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Perhaps after pricking themselves they just fell aslleep until the handsome Prince Richard Attenborough came along and kissed one of them, so they all woke up. Lobster with pickle indeed.


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
    Ha ha ha, you made me smile, this little guy is a survivor just like the cockroaches! Thank you for your review, love Dolly x
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Hello Dolly :)
I enjoyed reading your peppered pickle.
Lots of alliteration and internal rhyme throughout (even where the form does not dictate!) I liked it a lot :)
Best wishes, Debra


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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
    Thank you Debra for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
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How fun! There are so many species that were thought to be extinct but found to be alive. They are called the Lazarus species. Thank you for sharing about the tree lobsters well being in your well done peppered pickle poem!


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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
    Thank you Helen for your review, glad you enjoyed this peppered pickle, love Dolly x
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