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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Disbanding "

The lady's escape becomes a countrywide search

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This is a strong chapter. I really enjoyed the story. Your pacing is excellent (this doesn't feel rushed) and the story is interesting. Great use of dialogue as well. Wonderful story.


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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
    Thank you Michael for stopping by to review chapter 8. I do appreciate your review.
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You have a little bit of everything in this chapter: medical advice, army strategy, realignment of the goals, and hope. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
    Thank you for stopping by and for your kind review.
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