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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Evidence found"

The lady's escape becomes a countrywide search

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Ben B.
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Why is the word "Dismounting!" in an exclamation? I don't think that's how narration works in third person. Interesting how Garth died. Interesting story.


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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
    Thank you for stopping by to review this chapter. I'll take a look at the word you referenced. I always appreciate constructive critique.
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Very nicely done. I think you have done a great job with your descriptions. I could see this in my head. The story is interesting and the pacing is solid. The story doesn't feel rushed. Well written!


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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Michael, for taking the time to review Chapter nine. I appreciate your review.
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