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Bed Bugs


A Political Poem

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Thank you for the information and the poetic description which makes me think there might be an underlying political statement to these socialist blood suckers!


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you for your thoughtful review Helen, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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Well done with your comparison between the bed bugs and the politicians, the descriptions are great, in particular, the author notes, I could see some of ours in that description too. LOL
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valda


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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
    Thank you Valda for your review, I appreciate your understanding of my words here, love Dolly x
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This poem, Bedbugs, seems to be both a report on these distasteful critters, but also a call to rid the world of liberal pinkos. Fun with insects.


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
    Thank you Bill for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness Dolly... loved the comparison of bed bugs to left wing radicals. Very apt and timely. Your notes explaining the bedbugs and their habits creeped me out! LOL. Great write.

Melissa


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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this one Melissa and those left wingers are creepy! Love Dolly x
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A very well-written poem about the bed bugs that also remind us of the politicians that sucks out all the energy you have to feed their own hunger for power.


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you Sandra for your review, love Dolly x
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Dolly, This is a very interesting poem you have penned about the bed bugs. You used very good descriptive words and very good comments. Your art work is very nice too. Thanks for sharing. love, Teri


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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you Teri for your review, your words are appreciated, love Dolly x
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Very neat comparison of bedbugs to those other bloodsuckers, the politicians. Exterminators work on bedbugs, but the politicians just keep hanging around. A few years ago, I wrote about our experience with bedbugs. I got red red marks on my arms and even went to the doctor. I was so embarrassed, because I figured he probably knew what was going on but was too polite to tell me. He prescribed medication, anyway. Then I noticed the black spots on the sheets and pillowcases. We called the exterminators and are now bedbug free. I would not want to go through that again. Great description in your poem. judi


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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you Judi for your review, your words are appreciated, love Dolly x

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    You're welcome. judi

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    You're welcome. Have a great day. judi
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That's really good lt know Dolly, Elaine gets bitten every so often, creating a mossie bite like mark on her back or bottom, they don't seem to bother me, bad blood perhaps. This is an excellent post, great rhyming and rhythm. Well done, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you Roy for your review, your words are appreciated, not sure you understood the essence of this write though, love Dolly x

reply by royowen on 14-Oct-2020
    My pleasure
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Well you managed to make this little guy look pudgy and cute, but I can't imagine they are.

I got a charge out of how you compared it to the dichotomy facing countries all over the world today, because no one wants to admit that we squandered our wealth and now we are what you call broke.

This is the kind of political poetry I get a charge out of, because it is creatively taking a wee jab.

Much enjoyed. :))

Gloria


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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you Gloria for your wonderful review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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Thank goodness I have never suffered bed bug bites. Once in the States we went to a hotel where we saw all the mattresses out on the lawn. We were told they had a bed bug infestation. We drove on.


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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this one Rebecca, those pesky reds under the bed, your review is appreciated, love Dolly x
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