I thought this was well written. The relationship between Honore and Valerie was enjoyable to be a part of. I think the dialogue is natural. The concern for the lack of sleep natural and understandable. You do a wonderful job of painting a picture and letting your characters go and it feels so natural as the story builds. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
Thank you very much for reviewing. I really appreciate it and I'm glad the characters are flowing naturally.