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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Of the Practicality"

Romance in a world of magic.

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
Michael Ludwinder
 
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I thought this was well written. The relationship between Honore and Valerie was enjoyable to be a part of. I think the dialogue is natural. The concern for the lack of sleep natural and understandable. You do a wonderful job of painting a picture and letting your characters go and it feels so natural as the story builds. Great job.


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for reviewing. I really appreciate it and I'm glad the characters are flowing naturally.
Comment by
Shirley McLain
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Another excellent chapter. You did a great job. I think Valerie is heading for trouble with her decision. It will be interesting to see what happens. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for reviewing! I really appreciate it. Definitely some storm-clouds on the horizon.
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