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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Of the Letters"

Romance in a world of magic.

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
Iza Deleanu
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This chapter is romantic, beauty bursts from every sentence like a delicate pattern creating wonderful flowery ornaments on our heart. And here it's an example of that delicate and flagrant beauty that stays against the time:"Dear V,

It seems everything reminds me of you. The shades of autumn, the brilliant arrays of red and gold, are like nothing I have ever seen before and their beauty echoes your own transfiguration with many moods. The crackling of the fire beside me as I write imparts its heat, but that is woefully insignificant when I compare it to the warmth you bring with you wherever you go. The battles no longer capture my attention as they once did, replaced by enchanting memory and breathless hope. I look up at the stars in the hope that soon Aeson's Crook will guide me east, back to ?tain, back to you." I am so sorry that I am out of six, your chapter deserves this recognition.


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for reviewing! I appreciate the feedback and I'm really, really glad Thara's romanticism came across as well as I was aiming for.
Comment by
Dom The Writer
 
 
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Ooooh, I like this a lot little fantasy mixed with ah lil love mixed with ah lil mystery makes for a perfect short. Beautiful and very intriguing pls continue.


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it!
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