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This chapter is romantic, beauty bursts from every sentence like a delicate pattern creating wonderful flowery ornaments on our heart. And here it's an example of that delicate and flagrant beauty that stays against the time:"Dear V,
It seems everything reminds me of you. The shades of autumn, the brilliant arrays of red and gold, are like nothing I have ever seen before and their beauty echoes your own transfiguration with many moods. The crackling of the fire beside me as I write imparts its heat, but that is woefully insignificant when I compare it to the warmth you bring with you wherever you go. The battles no longer capture my attention as they once did, replaced by enchanting memory and breathless hope. I look up at the stars in the hope that soon Aeson's Crook will guide me east, back to Ã?tain, back to you." I am so sorry that I am out of six, your chapter deserves this recognition.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2020 |
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
Thank you very much for reviewing! I appreciate the feedback and I'm really, really glad Thara's romanticism came across as well as I was aiming for.
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