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Ginnygray
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Rating of the script ALL of the sudden! by His Grayness

Vance, this is definitely a good write and you have a creative "bent" in the clever way you have addressed these descriptive tips to Tom. I liked the one about how can you write if you are reclaiming your sleep. There is so much work to do with tuning your guitar, puppy needs walking, and the garage is in need of new insulation. All of these things Tom would think are good material for writing. I'm with you on getting back to creationville and you are a great example to follow! Cheers to you and I'm looking forward to your pen and the upcoming new poems, scripts, and stories. I enjoyed this one.


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Rating of the poem Stop by Candyland214

To me this seems like a very good entry into the "Four Line Poem" contest. I like the last line the very best - "If you knew how I felt you would stay". I have felt that way about a lot of things at different times but have most often kept the feeling hidden, unrevealed. Thanks for sharing


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Rating of the poem Deja Vu by Richard J

This free verse rings painfully true and touches my heart Richard. I know the writing prompt was to write about failure and perhaps there is no failure that hurts more deeply than a failed relationship. Where love is deepest, pain is most profound. You have captured that kind of pain precisely in your excellent wording and made the reader feel it too. That requires good writing. There are no errors, lots of deep emotion and vivid expression. A six for sure.
~ MM


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Rating of the poem Love at a Distance by WalkerMan

Hi Mike. This is an outstanding poem that I enjoyed reading. I'm sorry not to have a sixer for you. It's true. Sometimes we click with someone and will (most likely) never meet them. Still, it's a valuable alliance of sorts and is meaningful. Image is gorgeous. I'm glad to see a poem posted from you. Marilyn


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Rating of the poem Faith Is? by junglefighter

This is a good poem and what I believe to be a good entry into the "Faith Poetry Contest". My favorite part is : == "Faith is believing in God's love --to Him we all shall kneel.
He will dry our tears then teach us happy dreams that's real.
It is sharing hugs, then singing happy songs void of sorrow.
But, above all others, faith is loving one another tomorrow."
thanks for sharing


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