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Harbor of Hades
My sojourn across the River Styx



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Rating of the poem Conservation by Lloyd T. Okoko

Good poem. My, I am falling asleep. I will be taking a break soon.
I like this little poem. Goes well with the picture -- or picture goes well with the poem. It would make a good poster.
Good luck in the contest.


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Rating of the story Footprints on Paper by MissMerri

This is a beautiful story... It's amazing to me how everyone has a different thought process to tell their life's story. I found your story almost poetic, though it was, indeed, a story. Well done and congratulations!!


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Rating of the story Scents of Home and Family by dejohnsrld (Debbie)

When I look back on life. My favourite times were when my girls, Elaine and me were gathered round the kitchen table at the evening meal. I still remember them with great fondness. I'm sad that those days are in your past Debbie. Beautifully written my friend, blessings, Roy


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Rating of the poem A Symphony of Love by Henry King

A very well-written poem about the symphony of love and how we get over the loss of a dear partner during a grieving process. Each of us do it differently for as long as we need to.


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Rating of the poem Ungrateful Man by Dolly'sPoems

Hi Dolly,

Nice to see you entering the Minute poem contest. It's a tricky little poetry form, but I have always loved it. Sometimes I write a good one, and sometimes I don't.

Your iambic meter is not bad for this poem. It flows well with maybe a few rough spots. I'm glad to see meter being employed despite the site not requiring that aspect of this strict form. Good rhymes that follow the specified format.

I'm not so sure I'm getting your meaning in this poem. I get that war is bad and that God might not like war, but I don't know who you mean is ungrateful? The picture doesn't help me out there either. Maybe I'm just not fully awake yet to catch on?

Best wishes to you in the contest.

Joy xx


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