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Rating of the poem Computers Slowly Doing My Head In by duchessofdrumborg

Ah Duchess

Brilliant words - very clever use of typos! ("whatdayamean, what typos!")
It is strange that floppy dicks were substantially bigger than the stiffies which followed them. Too technical for me.

Age is a privilege, but it comes at a price. I often wonder what my father - long gone - would make of the modern world. I recall reading about a Polish man who was in a comma for 15 years from the mid-80's to 2000 and his observation was that the world was fantastically louder than he remembered. In my father's day a 'phone call was a rare and private affair - but these days people shout out their news, hands-free in the middle of the shopping centre.

Again, this is a great, witty and, in its own way, insightful piece.
I wish you well with your continued writing
cheers
phill


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Rating of the story Aye, There's the Rub by humpwhistle

I like the fact that you described it as an Eating disorder too :) As a lay reader, I find some of the humor a bit forced ( Sleep Lab being a dog breed). Also the business of waking up in a plate gets a bit repetitive. Simply stated, in my opinion, the piece could do with a little more editing. Nevertheless I enjoyed reading it :)


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Rating of the poem A Smile ... (sweet 'n sour tale) by Richard J

Good to read from you. I am away with life and options to it at the moment. Popped in for a while.
Anything with cats take my attention. Lyrically sound, you give him life.
Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RG


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Rating of the poem Murphy by Aussie

What a great story etched in reality and valour. Emotionally charged, it pulls at heartstrings of the humble.
Lovely, my dear friend. I am away with life and options at the moment, just popped in to update a little.
Good to read from you.
Have a beautiful day.
Best wishes.
RG


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Rating of the poem haiku-light butterfly by trimple

Beautiful. Brings colour and beauty to mind. Soft tones which brings that emphasis of calm.
Lovely. Hope all is well and going forward.
Best wishes.
Wishing you a great day, my friend.
RG


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