-Cute artwork and presentation.
-You have used your eight
words well to describe Sandy!
-Effective imagery, alliteration,
and good play on words.
-I also like the references
to "washed up" and "sea-lebrity."
-A clever entry; good luck.
-Good artwork and story, Yvette.
-It shows how crazy things are
at your house, and probably
many more like it:)
-I like your comments
in the opening paragraphs,
wondering how they survived at college!
-I wonder if Jonathan is a
"chip off the block?" He seems
pretty business savvy and clever!
-Great ending and story.
-You could start a series of
these to show us what
your household is like these days!
-Good luck in the contest.
It seems like it was the cruise ship of days gone by. It was said to be unsinkable, but, what an unpleasant surprise. I've heard that this dilemma could have been avoided. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Rating of the book chapter Generations Chapter 5 of the book Prayers for Fanstory Family
I like this considerate and compassionate heart cry that resonates from the words that you've penned here. He sees and hears every prayer and every tear that's shed. This is good work Helen and I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!