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St. Louis Chapter 13 part 1
Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?

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Rating of the story The Soldier's Ghost by estory

I, too, am a huge Civil War buff and have been to Gettysburg a few times. From personal experience, you describe the ambience of the location well. I have to agree that the field of Picket's Charge would not be a place to be after dark - I would add Devil's Den to that as well. Having been on several paranormal tours there, your statement that it is the most haunted is apt and well earned by the entire town since there is not a pot where untimely death did not meet Pennsylvania earth. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

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Rating of the poem Love's Furrow by Alex Rosel

How fun! To put the decision to have a child together in terms of a mathematical formula! But your muse is nothing like mine! Good look with the poetry contest entry.

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Rating of the poem Japanese Beetle

Your poem works very well. Even before I read the e xplanation, I knew the beetle must wreck havoc with the fruit, to cause such a stir of human emotions. Good luck with the contest.

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Rating of the story Kranski Reinvents Himself

Just like a man - go for the young chics. All right, girl, I didn't need the gory details about his grooming, haha.

This is excellent, B.P. You did a top notch job balancing description, plot and characterization. Definitely worthy of the extra star. Hugs, Lou

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Rating of the poem Serene, Beside You by LisaMay

This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a structurally sound Loop Poem. I don't care for this style much as it usually comes across as hokey, but you have elevated it with wonderfully vivid imagery and gracefully flowing meter. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

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