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Lion, in the Sun
A poem with semi-rhyme quatrains and cinquains



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Pam (respa)
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Rating of the poem A Washed-up Star

-Cute artwork and presentation.
-You have used your eight
words well to describe Sandy!
-Effective imagery, alliteration,
and good play on words.
-I also like the references
to "washed up" and "sea-lebrity."
-A clever entry; good luck.


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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Pam (respa)
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Rating of the story Entrepreneurship: COVID-Style by Y. M. Roger

-Good artwork and story, Yvette.
-It shows how crazy things are
at your house, and probably
many more like it:)
-I like your comments
in the opening paragraphs,
wondering how they survived at college!
-I wonder if Jonathan is a
"chip off the block?" He seems
pretty business savvy and clever!
-Great ending and story.
-You could start a series of
these to show us what
your household is like these days!
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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Jeffrey L. Michaux
Jeff Michaux
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Rating of the poem Adventure

It seems like it was the cruise ship of days gone by. It was said to be unsinkable, but, what an unpleasant surprise. I've heard that this dilemma could have been avoided. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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Jeffrey L. Michaux
Jeff Michaux
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Rating of the book chapter Generations
Chapter 5 of the book Prayers for Fanstory Family

I like this considerate and compassionate heart cry that resonates from the words that you've penned here. He sees and hears every prayer and every tear that's shed. This is good work Helen and I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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Rating of the poem Lion, in the Sun

-Good artwork and
presentation, Ross.
-You have written a
good poem with many
images and situations
that have occurred over time,
using the lion as the theme.
-Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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