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joycetreasures
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Jesus I Don't Understand
 
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Rating of the poem The Rapture by January L'Angelle

Hello January,
I pray you are well, as well as your family. I love your beautiful heavenly artwork of the Heavens. It's an amazing piece of God's nature. I love your message of the Rapture. So many unbelievable things are happening over the last few years in this world, such as so much hatred between each other, less people attending the worship house, and this unwanted pandemic. I do believe the Lord is coming back with a shout soon. I await the eternal peace of the Lord. This is a beautiful written poem of getting ready for the rapture. Well-done.


 Comment Written 28-May-2020

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rspoet
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Rating of the poem Don't Look So Sad

You've written an excellent 3-7-5 poem for the contest
with a very good theme that many can relate to.
Helping someone in need, whether physically or
emotionally, not only helps the one in need
but often raises the spirits of the one helping.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert


 Comment Written 28-May-2020

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RodG
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Rating of the poem Summer Breeze

Summer + warm breezes + plus magical sunsets = wonderful memories of one's first love. You can not convey it any better in 11 syllables than you did here. Rod


 Comment Written 28-May-2020


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Margaret Bednar
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Rating of the poem As The Red Sun Sets
Chapter 80 of the book Horror Haiku

You make death beautiful and comforting. I just looked at some of my old tankas and I think only one works. Way back when I thought Haiku was just 5-7-5. Ha. Gorgeous images as usual.


 Comment Written 28-May-2020

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Pam (respa)
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Rating of the poem Human Toll by Lordinajamjar

-Good artwork and presentation, John.
-Hope you are doing well.
-A good minute poem with a good topic.
-The poem flows well from verse to verse.
-You make a good point about
what some of us put God through.
-The imagery is very good, and
shows that even God can get
tired sometimes.
-A couple of things to look at:
*In the line about angels, you have 9 syllables.
*Cast off things is only 3
-Otherwise, it is a very good poem.
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 28-May-2020

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