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Stagnation by Poetic Friend

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I am so glad you noted in Author Notes that this poem was fictional
for you! Yet rightly and sadly describing that this kind of ennui and
routine of lifeless anonymity life style is all too common and evident
reminder of it abounds around us. Your imagery is perfectly impacted
in your choice of stagnation effects words and fear of change consequences. Some rather stay in stagnation than take on change.
Picture capture is likewise compelling to theme and message.
Thanks for sharing.
P.S. You so kindly reviewed my poem, 'Only Such A Love' and
appreciations of its theme and intent, I deemed it quite befitting
I review one of yours, not having read any of yours before. This
is sure to change as I will eagerly looking forward to reading
more of your works too. Love your style and presentation.
Best wishes always, Ronni
Comment Written by Ronni on 05-Jan-2021

Ruthless Raptors by Dolly'sPoems

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Hi dear Dolly,
The killer raptors instinctual and survival instinct is both
fiendishly and frenetically center stage of most visceral
and grim descriptions and horrific effects, yet it is candidly
factual on how the animal world survives or prevails.
Thanks for sharing. Hope you had a fantastic Xmas!
Love, blessings always, Ronni


Comment Written by Ronni on 04-Jan-2021

Down By The River by Sally Law

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Hi dear Sally,
That's the best place to leave them dear! Most profound release
and reprieve in such fe words! Thanks for sharing. Your
wit and wisdom is ever a precious pearl in your writes always!
Just got back home afte spendint Xmas Holidays out of state
vising family & friends; so have some catching up to do on your
posts, and happily so. Hope you had a fantastic Xmas too!
Love, blessings,always!!!! Ronni
Comment Written by Ronni on 04-Jan-2021

Christmas is over by Mary Vigasin

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Hi dear Mary,
A tender and tenacious wind down and let down after Christmas,
easily related to and so inspiring and consoling in its message
regarding importance and meaning left behind after its over.
My tree and manger stay up too till Feast of Epiphany....a long
held European custom I am familiar with heritage and custom wise.
Thanks for sharing dear.
Best wishes always, Ronni
Comment Written by Ronni on 04-Jan-2021

Writing Critique by Mary Vigasin

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Hi dear Mary,
Your point and dismay is well taken to task and question of
those kind of perfection obsessed reviewers, who give lowest
critiques, and grammatical or technical flaws in their reviews,
but offer no constructive comments or suggestions, which
if they were as aware and versed in the site's Guidelines for
reviews and ratings, as they are in fault with certain words
or expressions, they would be more helpful and respectful of
writer's work, than trashing and belittling it to sound authorative.
Never mind the bashers of your work, and just keep on writing
anyway and all the more edified and appreciative of those reviewers
who do take time to suggest, encourage and compliment your
work and effort, that is what I learned and can relate to you with.
Tanks for sharing dear....keep writing!
Best wishes always, Ronni




Comment Written by Ronni on 04-Jan-2021

When In Rings The Brand New Year by Y. M. Roger

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Hi dear Yvette!
Well glory be, there you are! When in rings the bell of joy and wondrous
treats your muse and pen enchant and enthrall us, comes one just
such as this one dear!!!! And oh how we have missed you too, to count
the was would be too immeasurable and still lacking more!!!!
This is a lovely, whimsey and yet poignantly nostalgic reflections and
affectations of ringing in the New Year!!! It beams and sings in pulse
and tone ever so enticingly! Both realistic and delightfully raptured with
all your zest and spirit, really rock with this timely treasure dear!
Love, blessings always, Ronni (:) (;)
P.S. If you ever find a spare minute, there is a Xmas Song sent you to
your EM. (since 12/23) and check it out. And MAYBE quite surprised!
Comment Written by Ronni on 01-Jan-2021

Acrostic Acrobatics 2020 by Y. M. Roger

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Hi dear Yvette,
This is both a bepuzzling abstract of neither nor, anything and
nothing or something one could wrestle in their mind with for
hours on end. A mind tease or linguistic strip peek neither
eye or mind can surface with envy or enlightenment!
But leave it to you...mystery and marvel at its most
poignant proclivities and inevitabilities. Thanks for sharing!
Love, blessings, Ronni (;) (:)
Comment Written by Ronni on 18-Dec-2020

When Whispers The Heart by Y. M. Roger

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Hello dear Yvette!
There you are dear amazing one! That 'you're baaaaaaaaaaacccck...
leaves no doubt, for here you are at your 'vintage best', (not meant
as reference to age, but rather sheer depth and scope of effect) stunning
awe, innovation of your sensational pen prolific elations!
Here in
'When Whispers The Heart'... are whirling, delirious, sensitive, serenely
humble and impassioned reflections and flash backs on life, love,
loyalty, truth and tragedies non compromise to defeat or deterrance.
A compelling legacy and legend penned with soul searing Hosanna and
Halleluia of triumph and ever abiding gratitude and dedication!
Thanks for sharing dear, and so glaaaaaaaaaadddddd you're back!!!!
Love, blessings always, Ronni







Comment Written by Ronni on 18-Dec-2020

Christmas Anthology by Sally Law

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Hi dear Sally,
This is a most cherished and revered Christmas Anthology that
has lasted over centuries past since its forever sacred and
serene event. Questions posed in this poem most poignant and
soul searching indeed, asked many times over by Christian souls
and believers the world over. Your summation phrases so gently
and compassionately yield answers and truths that are everlasting
and will never cease to touch us so profoundly and gratefully.
Thanks for sharing dear....God Bless...Have a beautiful, blessed
Christmas too dear.
Love, blessings always, Ronni
Comment Written by Ronni on 15-Dec-2020

When did you get to be so old? by Mary Vigasin

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Hi dear Mary,
This is such a truly realistically and nostalgically poignant and precious
poem indeed! And all the more relatable too, as I too am often surprisingly dismayed and disbelieving as how so often we do not
see aging in some people, family or friends until Birthday time comes
around! Yet, perhaps it is best that we remember some like they
were and most adorable and unforgettable; no matter how old they
get to be! Perhaps we can hope they too see or remember us at
the age they best remembered or cherished us, than how much we
too have aged ahead of them. LOL... A joy to read. Thanks for
sharing.
Blessings always, Ronni
Comment Written by Ronni on 15-Dec-2020


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