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Penny's Marriage script by MCLII1987

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THIS SCENE STARTED OFF WITH A BANG, BUT I SORT OF LOST THE MAIN IDEA! HOWEVER, THE WIFE SEEMS TO WANT TO GIVE IT A SECOND TRIAL RUN! COMMITMENT DOES NOT SEEM TO BE IN THE MIX!
Comment Written by Charmane on 21-Jul-2015

You brought the pain by ronnie k

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THIS IS A POEM THAT JERKS TO TWIST THE ENTIRE MIND, BODY, AND SOUL! IT IS TRULY AMAZING AND INTENSE! EFFORTLESS GAMES SEEM TO AMAZE AND CONFUSE! PAIN AND HEARTACHE IS INTERJECTED BETWEEN LOVERS AS THEY SEEM COLD AND INCONSIDERATE TOWARD EACH OTHER! I IKE THIS POEM BECAUSE THE LOVERS VENT ALOUD. THE CONVERSATION IS THEN HEATED BEFORE IT QUIETS DOWN. i LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT ALLOWS THE READER TO DETERMINE WHO BROUGHT THE PAIN!
Comment Written by Charmane on 21-Jul-2015

Lord ! Why me by ronnie k

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I like this poem because it realistically pleas for hope and
help! The author is lamenting and just waiting for God to give
him hope and bountiful blessings! The flow and in depth passion surfaces within the body of ths poem!....An excellent read!
Comment Written by Charmane on 21-Jul-2015

A Prisoner of the Past by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 16 of the book World As I See It 4

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I found this poem to be like a synopsis of a bigger picture!
Too deep still are memories that nag and try to weigh the characters down!
One must sometimes get help to aid in the healing process!
I like the poem because it draws you close into the character's heart and soul.
Comment Written by Charmane on 04-Jul-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

MY name is RONALD by ronnie k
Chapter 110 of the book Come suffer with ME

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This poem is packed with a powerful message! I love the way that it incorporates your theme of addiction and how it had control over you at one time! Now, the tide has turned, and you are now able to look straight ahead and continue to lead a very fruitful life!
Comment Written by Charmane on 22-May-2015

My Fickle Spring by Nosha17

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Spring is celebrated and hailed in all of its grandeur!
One enjoys its early presence and the beauty that it
creates! Plants spring up to lead the way for a voluptuous
and awesome day!
Comment Written by Charmane on 18-Apr-2015

Inside my head by ronnie k

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I like this poem although it sounds a bit morbid! Fear means that yo u are afraid to face life and all that it throws out to you. I like this little gem because it makekes me think about the good, bad, and temptous side of life~
Comment Written by Charmane on 19-Mar-2015

A day/ A step at a time by ronnie k
Chapter 5 of the book Come suffer with ME

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I love this little poem. It reaches out to the
reader to seize the day as well as opportunities too.
Regardless of the bumps and bruise that we may
encounter, our job is to steer straight ahead and move
forward with our goals and plans! The struggle is worth
accomplishing our ultimate goals.
Comment Written by Charmane on 27-Feb-2015

One Last Time by elpsog

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This is a very special tribute from father to daughter as he acknowledges her exit from his loving care, and into the arms of her beloved husband! This poem pulls you inside of this moment and readers get an opportunity to share in this joyous occasion!
Comment Written by Charmane on 25-Feb-2015

Blue Eyes by bkbehera

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Blue eyes are compared to
the big beautiful dew drops
that pause atop the Lily
leaves. The author serenades
and admires her blue eyes as
they lurk and quietly plead for love
Comment Written by Charmane on 24-Feb-2015


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