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The Legend of the Spirit Bear by webfoot
Chapter 21 of the book LEGEND OF THE SPIRIT BEAR

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A fantastic story, children would obviously enjoy the interesting story of the spirit bear and how the legend breaks through; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 12-Jul-2020

Paper Projects by Aiona

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The wasps never know the purpose of paper projects, they play making their bests; some are still buzzing; what the hell! Well said, thank you for sharing this; good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 12-Jul-2020

A Planet in Distress by BethShelby

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Since the day of creation, human suffering has been inevitable, we all suffer; someone endures silently and someone raises voice, cries at pains, we know only a few of sufferings caused everyday somewhere; well said; thank you for sharing this. Good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 12-Jul-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Aaron Makes a Decision by Cindy Warren
Chapter 31 of the book Aaron's Dragons

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A decision has to be taken, and Aaron takes a decision, I like the orderly progressive taletelling and good plot development, brief but to the point and contributory dialogues; resolved and intended ending; well said; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 12-Jul-2020

Lost on the Trails by Lynn M Watson

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In peak season, it happens; tourists may not find hats hung on branches; season and human relation well said; thanks for sharing this; wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 11-Jul-2020

Spotted Tail by Ben Colder
Chapter 29 of the book A Grain Of Wheat

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I like, read and have enjoyed this chapter, artistic taletelling, setting, cultural theme and the plot progression; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 11-Jul-2020

Live On...Faith by CrystieCookie999

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This faith poem speaks what is real, true and deep faith in God and what action includes; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 11-Jul-2020

Anger by Mike Stevens

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Anger is rude, there is danger in anger, but Trump does not understand and comments and bully at random for grabbing his second term of office; well said, ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 11-Jul-2020

Where did it go? by dmt1967

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Perhaps human is getting away from humanity; well said in this rhyming poem, I like and have enjoyed the rhymes, rhyme scheme, rhyme couplets and rhythmic flow of thoughts; wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 11-Jul-2020

The Gap by Marjon van Bruggen

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Whether a painter or a poet, intent speaks wisdom and if it is fulfilled in painting or poem, it becomes a complete work of art; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written by Alcreator Litt Dear on 11-Jul-2020


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