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To Shine Joy's Light by Mrs. KT

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Smiles to you for your beautiful poem
To Shine Joy's Light
with your words turn on the switch to say
joy's light shone far greater than hate;
joy's light shone in me
Gert
Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 19-Oct-2020

Sleep in Peace by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 46 of the book 2020-5

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Barb ( Barb Hensongispsaca
Your nonet challenge-----Sleep in Peace
is beautiful. I love the picture of the moter holding her precious baby. And saying or singing-such beautiful words.

Gert
Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 19-Oct-2020

Learning from Cardinals by lyenochka

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lyenochka
Your minute poem flows so well as you tell us the nature of the red cardinals. We have them here in Vermont year around. I know one thing they definitely stand out when we have snow on the ground.
Gert
Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 19-Oct-2020

I will not judge... by royowen

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Roy you indeed have a poem about judging the ones you love is beautifully worded
I liked the flow of your free verse saying----

My love and grace are strong enough
to shelter hope's sweet dreams
Remove your sin and bury them
Gert



Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 19-Oct-2020

A Vampire's Proposal by lancellot

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lancellot your poem A Vampire's Proposal
Has excellent rhyming pattern
Even if I don't believe in Vampires
Your way with words were powerful enough to keep me reading to the end
Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 19-Oct-2020

Aspirations... by royowen

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Hello Roy you said a lot in only 5-7-5 syllables
It's a shame that there isn't good sportsmanship between teams; when they are playing any type of sport, have a good attitude even if your team did'nt win.
Gert
Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 19-Oct-2020

Why did Jesus come? by royowen

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Roy, my what a perfect poem to remind each of us the reason that Our Lord didn't bare any weapons, instead He used His gentle, but demanding voice to bring Peace
Gert
Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 19-Oct-2020

A New Way by Barb Hensongispsaca

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Hello Barb Hensongispsaca
How I wish could I tell you a New Way
it sounds like you are referring your Grandson
Smiles to your rhyming and your closing line-
(he is my walking petri dish ...destruction in his wake)
What about reading your poem to your Grandson
Gert
Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 19-Oct-2020

Tonight's One-Third by Jay Squires

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Hello Jay Squires
So you are battling with the lack of sleep
I can see trying to be like the Dutch, but instead of your finger, you are using clay to stop the rain.
Then your mind deprived of sleep wants find other various solutions with your comical words, such as to stop the annoying sound of the rain that slops and spattering on your roof.
I will be waiting for your early morning rambles along with your entertaining quotes.
Gert
Gert
Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 19-Oct-2020

Mermaid Halloween by mermaids

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Hello
mermaids what a wonderful imagination you have how the mermaids are celebrating Halloween as--
they shout through waves
join our festivities under blue salty ocean
sea goblins arise from watery graves
Gert
Comment Written by Gert sherwood on 18-Oct-2020


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