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Anticipation by DonandVicki

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Okay, now that really seems like a romantic move. I will have to try this one. I won't ask how it all went but I have a feeling it was memorable. good on the form and the count too.
Comment Written by lancellot on 06-Jan-2017

Queen Anne's Lace by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Very good, and I think it is a poem many can relate too. So many have that one person in our past, who we can't forget. how things went wrong and we long to turn back time for another chance.

Very moving.
Comment Written by lancellot on 05-Jan-2017

The Patient by Margaret Snowdon
Chapter 5 of the book THE SCENTED SHAWL

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Another vividly written chapter. The reader can almost feel the warmth and concern from Rosaline. Even though Brady did not talk, he communicated a lot through what you had him do and think.

simply a perfectly written chapter.
Comment Written by lancellot on 05-Jan-2017

The Horseman by Margaret Snowdon
Chapter 4 of the book THE SCENTED SHAWL

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Ah, I like how this story is building. I must say it is a pleasure to read how you 'paint'. This was a time when men still had some respect for the good shown to them. Let's see if Brady pulls through.
Comment Written by lancellot on 04-Jan-2017

Going Down with the Ship by frogbook

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Hmm, very interesting. One possible future and I like ease of it. No panic as it has been happening slowly for awhile. Just go down with the ship with dignity.

Well done.
Comment Written by lancellot on 04-Jan-2017

Sad Passions by Jacqueline1616
Chapter 9 of the book Artisan

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This is a very well written chapter. I will take your advice and go back to the previous chapters to read.

notes:


"I've seen better days.(") I'm sorry I put you through this.... Although, you... on the other hand can suck it, oh wait you already did."

- delete.

Comment Written by lancellot on 04-Jan-2017

Brady Sullivan by Margaret Snowdon
Chapter 3 of the book THE SCENTED SHAWL

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Oh well, at least Brady will get into Heaven, or at least be reborn as a richer man. Good build up and I like that ending of this chapter wasn't a fairy tale ending. If they would rape girls, they would surely murder Brady.

Well done.
Comment Written by lancellot on 04-Jan-2017

Beyond the Horizon by June Sargent

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I like this. I think sums up one form of romance and love perfectly. And it happens that many of our older members will agree with this sentiment. I think this will do well.

Comment Written by lancellot on 04-Jan-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Fear by Margaret Snowdon
Chapter 2 of the book THE SCENTED SHAWL

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A very good chapter. I guess in every group there is at least one who still has a spark of decency that can be reached by the right person. Let's hope that spark and courage is enough.

Good work.
Comment Written by lancellot on 04-Jan-2017

No Need to Say Goodbye by JennaG

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This is very good and makes the perfect after Christmas poem. I can certainly see how for some, it is the building of lasting memories that make these kinds of holiday's with the family so special.

Well crafted.
Comment Written by lancellot on 04-Jan-2017


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