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Enrique Iglesias by tempeste

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Muy bueno essence. Enjoyed the colorful and fun Bailando music video. He definitely had the girls in heat, in swirls keeping the beat. Nice job with the essence poem that perfectly fits the video. Good internal and external rhymes helps put the reader in the midst of the dance. This is an excellent essence poem and should to well in the contest.

Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written by starkat on 19-Nov-2019
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Chip technology by Jeffrey L. Michaux

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Hopefully, the future won't be where we are forced to have chips implanted and we relinquish control over our lives. However, there are some companies, overseas, that currently require employees be microchipped. What if AI goes out of control and destroys humanity. I'm sure future movies will explore this issue. Excellent essence poem. Nice job with internal and external rhymes. This is a thought provoking essence.

Good luck in the contest -
Cheers ... ;>)
Comment Written by starkat on 18-Nov-2019
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Wondrous Snowy Winter Nights by Mrs. KT

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Enjoy the picturesque scene you paint with this well written essence poem. Well chosen word choices and rhymes makes the poem flow. The poem works even without the pretty picture and eye-catching gif. I've experience nights like this, and other nights that were just cold and miserable. This is an excellent essence poem and should do well in the contest.

Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written by starkat on 18-Nov-2019
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Heavenly Sight-Seeing by Y. M. Roger

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Nice visuals and metaphor in this well written essence poem. Creative and imaginative to see the shooting stars as God's race cars. Wonderful artwork and presentation. This is an excellent essence poem and should do well in this contest.

Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written by starkat on 18-Nov-2019
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I wish by jenintorre

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Excellent contest entry - all seven words designed to have an impact as they unleash a host of questions and scenarios. Since you haven't met your mother, there are many possibilities if your wish came true. The seven words would be an excellent opening sentence for a story or novel.
Great job with artwork and font size, spacing .. etc. Good luck in this contest.
Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written by starkat on 23-May-2019
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Life is love.. by rjuselius

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Also,

Life is
a miracle
to all

and

We are
all miracles
in life

Enjoyed your poem and colorful fancy artwork. 242's are hard to do.
Well done. You make each syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written by starkat on 18-May-2019

Time For Silliness by Roxanna Andrews

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Okay - let's see a pic of you in tutu and tights, that would be silly and light. Jimmy Fallon is pretty good a silliness and acts like a drunk chipmunk on drugs at times.
I do understand, it's hard to find humor when you discover you were so close to someone that became a murderer. Seeing him on a real life TV show had to have been quite a shock. When you had lunch with him, I'll bet he acted normal and you couldn't have detected the monster within. If drugs weren't involved, Paul might not have gone crazy.
I find myself drawn to these real life murder mystery shows like 'Dateline', and the 'Justice' network and 'Escape'. They are much more interesting than the other stuff on TV.
Enjoyed your rhyming couplet poem which is thought-provoking from many different angles.
Cheer up - dance around in your tutu and tights - ;o)
Comment Written by starkat on 18-May-2019

Euchre Shenanigans by Mrs. KT

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Well written and rhymed limerick that takes the reader into the card game to meet scary Uncle Barry with the huge rump who loves to win. I've never heard of euchre, but it sounds interesting. Your limerick is fun and entertaining. Good luck in the contest. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written by starkat on 17-May-2019
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One Tiny Little Rabbit by robyn corum
Chapter 13 of the book You Can Count on Me!

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Delightful story within this nicely rhymed and designed poem for the eyes of children. Wonderful presentation. It's fun to follow the journey of this tiny little hungry bunny. Emphasizing the word, ONE, is effective in focusing the scenario. And you employed humor as we imagine the little gas create by the little radish, and the nap needed til the bubbles passed. He must have been really hungry to eat a whole melon.

Enjoyed your poem. Excellent chapter for a book. Since Easter is just around the corner, lots of little eyes are on the look for bunnies and rabbits. Bunnies and rabbits are running rampant in my neighborhood.

Well done.
Cheers ... ;o)

Comment Written by starkat on 16-Apr-2019

Send Sunshine by Gail Denham

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Polysemic is an obscure word I've never heard of - thanks for the notes on the definition. Your poem provides a good example of the word as we see 'wind' with two meanings and 'wound' with two meanings. Nice choice of artwork compliments the poem.

Great job.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written by starkat on 10-Apr-2019
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