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Good bye Mr. President by justswf
Chapter 65 of the book A Unique Perspective

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Great job on the poem. I always find the shortest ones the hardest. You were able to convey a complete story with it. Thanks for sharing your writing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 09-Jan-2021

Conjunction by Melissa Russell Deur

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Great job on the poem. I always find the shortest ones the hardest. You were able to convey a complete story with it. Thanks for sharing your writing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 09-Jan-2021

The Hand by Iza Deleanu
Chapter 84 of the book The Corona saga

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Great job on the story. You were able to convey a complete story with it even though it was hort. Thanks for sharing your writing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 09-Jan-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Icy Chimes by HarryT

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Great job on the poem. I always find the shortest ones the hardest. You were able to convey a complete story with it. Thanks for sharing your writing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 09-Jan-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Paint it Black by Alli Johnston

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Great job on the poem. I always find the shortest ones the hardest. You were able to convey a complete story with it. Thanks for sharing your writing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 09-Jan-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Red Alert! by Begin Again

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I found the character to be interesting and engaging. The story seemed natural. The character draws you into the story. Overall a well-crafted piece. It was an easy read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 09-Jan-2021

Baiyun's First March by Jasmine Girl
Chapter 7 of the book Tiananmen Square, A Script

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I found the character to be interesting and engaging. The story seemed natural. The character draws you into the story. The dialogue sounded natural. Overall a well-crafted piece. It was an easy read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 09-Jan-2021

Why me, Lord? by Begin Again

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I found the character to be interesting and engaging. The story seemed natural. The character draws you into the story. The dialogue sounded natural. Overall a well-crafted piece. It was an easy read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 09-Jan-2021

Twittering Heights by Lordinajamjar

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I found the character to be interesting and engaging. The story seemed natural. The character draws you into the story. The dialogue sounded natural. It was an easy read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 09-Jan-2021

A Woman's Search by Alchera
Prologue of the book 2021

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You did a great job on this piece. It was beautifully done. You were able to convey a lot of emotion with it. Thanks for sharing your writing and as always keep on writing
Comment Written by Jaime Deagle on 08-Jan-2021


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