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Dancing in celestial moonlight by G.B. Smith

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You're so full of romantic lyrics that I cannot fathom where you have them all stored-yet, I do know. They are from your heart and soul which has no limits. Beautifully written, Bear. Mary
Comment Written by mslink1 on 05-Mar-2012

All that I am by G.B. Smith

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As you have touched the hearts of those that have had the pleasure of knowing you, Bear. This is a beautiful, heartfelt poem that I'm so glad I read. Give Tonia my love--a big 'Hello.' Mary
Comment Written by mslink1 on 22-Jan-2012

Our loving is remembered by G.B. Smith

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Few words, but carries a bang:)You found the perfect picture for the explosive love that's in your heart for Tonia. Stay well and I'm so happy to have met you, even if, just via our writing world. Mary
Comment Written by mslink1 on 22-Jan-2012

The adventures of Little Munch by G.B. Smith

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Bear--this is the first I've read about your Little Munch. It sounds adorable and I wish you nothing more than the best with its success. Mary
Comment Written by mslink1 on 22-Jan-2012

Again with you by G.B. Smith

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Great artwork that tells a story of heated passion. You, my friend, greatly enhanced this love story.

But most important, I'll do it again with you: Icing on the cake lol: I'm sure Gert wasn't surprised that you met this challenge head on ...and won:) Mary
Comment Written by mslink1 on 25-Nov-2011

Still waters by G.B. Smith

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It went different because your mind said one thing, but, the heart says different. I'm glad you chose to pen what the heart said, because it's beautiful.
This line hit home for me....
You are more than my best friend, you are my sweetest memory.
Your friend and fan, Mary
Comment Written by mslink1 on 01-Nov-2011

Lovers in the moonlight by G.B. Smith

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Perhaps it did...the poet says, hahahaha. If you were there...need I say more:)
This is a beautiful, Bear, as is all of your love poems. Now I really must go and take a cold shower. Love you and your poetry.
Comment Written by mslink1 on 31-Oct-2011

Witness by Mastery

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Your word choices are powerful and tell a story that all knows about.You did the picture justice,Bob.Take care, my friend and keep writing. Mary
Comment Written by mslink1 on 31-Oct-2011

Muddy Heart by bookishfabler

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Heidi,what a delightful short fiction story. It meets all the requirements and is well written. Absolutely loved the ending, simply perrrfect. Muddy Heart--nice touch:) Mary
Comment Written by mslink1 on 31-Oct-2011

The Beginnings of a Bad Day by Semchuva
Chapter 1 of the book Blindsided

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'No matter that' my outfit came from an exclusive (Although my outfit--sounds much better--even tho it is a ff of 250 or less. You would still have 246. This is just a suggestion for better flow.)
Loved your story--held my interest from top to finish.Hmm who was that masked 'person?'
Comment Written by mslink1 on 30-Oct-2011
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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