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Say My Name by Deejharrington

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is wonderful and should be published. You brought fear to life, you have given it a face and a soul. Your words flow into the readers heart. This verse showcases your talent.
Comment Written by gerry26 on 05-Apr-2011

Two Busy Body Muses by Deejharrington

Excellent
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I really enjoyed this, it brought a smile to my face. You could have made this into a great short story. Your words jump off the page and into the readers heart. Plus I learned a lot from the verse.
Comment Written by gerry26 on 05-Apr-2011

Celebrating Norooz by Joan E.

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Wonderfully done and I learned something again. You words interest the reader in the subject matter. You have a talent to tell a story in very few words.
Comment Written by gerry26 on 05-Apr-2011

Lichtenstein's Process 1923-1997 by Joan E.

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You paid a great honor to this artist. Your words describe his works well. See I learned something again....

Good job
Comment Written by gerry26 on 01-Mar-2011

Chemo - Phase Two by barbara.wilkey

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You explain this like you are writing about a stranger and because of that you are able to be so detailed. I pray for you my friend and I know you are going to get good news.
Comment Written by gerry26 on 01-Mar-2011

Emily's First Mission by WRITER1
Chapter 6 of the book The Life of Emily Rose

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Fast paced, interesting. I felt like I was sailing on the ship. Your characters are strong and your story-line sounds like a winner. I loved the dialog.

gerry
Comment Written by gerry26 on 25-Feb-2011

Little Brown Jug by sunny39
Chapter 18 of the book Red Fox Farm

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Well you did it again, another great chapter. Your characters get stronger and stronger. I could almost smell spring by you lavish descriptions.

Wonderful

gerry
Comment Written by gerry26 on 25-Feb-2011

Pomegranates by Joan E.

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Brilliant, you made me want to run out and buy some. Your are the only person I know that can make a fruit come to life on the page. I admire your talent.

Good luck in the contest

gerry
Comment Written by gerry26 on 25-Feb-2011

A Tree Perspective by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You are very creative and Talented. Your well chosen words jump off the page and int the readers heart. I love the part where the tree answers you.
Comment Written by gerry26 on 25-Feb-2011

A Life In My Day by Patrick Jordan

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you are very creative. I loved the part of your earliest memory and the TV. Your verse rings true and your well chosen words bring it to life.
Comment Written by gerry26 on 25-Feb-2011


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