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Robert Loy Gonzalez

Boston by sweetwoodjax
Chapter 1 of the book Boston Marathon Memorial

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Very good! I was about to write something in memory of them since I am a runner my self. Such a tragedy. Anyways good job
Rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 16-Apr-2013

Remove Depression's Cloak by sweetwoodjax

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Great use of word choice led to perfect imagery and a right way of poetic structure. I enjoyed reading this poem as much as I did reviewing it
Rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 14-Apr-2013

Life's a Spinning Carousel by adewpearl

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I personally like it; it was clear of the story and the message it was representing. The repitition of the words used was good.
Rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 13-Apr-2013

Prologue by LittleMissSunshine
Prologue of the book 9 lives

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Interesting I am definitely going to be reading this story. You did a fine job at capturing the readers attention and I'm sure this story is going to end up great.
Rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 12-Apr-2013

Red Poppies Bloom by sweetwoodjax

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I liked this poem a lot it reminded me of the Beatles song strawberry fields which is a song I personal enjoy hearing. Good luck in the contest.
Rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 12-Apr-2013

literate lust by gilligirl

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it was funny however. the line:

"My legs open like s book"

I think you mean:

"My legs open like a book"

should probably fix that part. besides that it was funny and enjoyable.
rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 12-Apr-2013

Natures Band by Victor Black

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very beautiful prayer or poem either or it does great. the structure is awesome and you did a fine job writing it. keep it up.
rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 12-Apr-2013

Our Heavenly Mayor Max by BeasPeas
Chapter 12 of the book Connections ~ NaPoWriMo 2013

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i liked it. it told a story. the format was standard, the structure was precise as expected; 10 syllable count. you did a great job on it. keep it up
rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 12-Apr-2013

Fatal Arrogance by James Humphreys

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you did a great job at capturing each word on the note. the format is standard, the use of words is great, and the structure is easy to read. however when reading out loud it stumbled anyways it deserves what i gave it, good work and keep writing.
rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 12-Apr-2013

Sweet Girl by Parissa

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you did a very great job at creating a vivid poetic piece. it flows well when spoken on the tongue and its rhythm fits well.
rob
Comment Written by Robert Loy Gonzalez on 12-Apr-2013


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