Football Chapter 12 part 2
Katherine finds out who's been watching her.
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PatriciaLiteHickman

Sir Dark Knight by themanicdude

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Astute capture and truth, genre could easily be commentary & philosophy (if we still have that offered). Well done, nothing to correct of course, I am glad I read it. Blessings, Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 21-Aug-2011

Implanted in the Dawn by Kingsland
Chapter 82 of the book Kingslanding

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Hello John, great presentation and rhyming scheme as well~ I loved this: "The sounds are carefully measured
In delicate gains of endeavors
Crashing inside a content of clever
Near the narrow opening of never"

Well done, as always~ I'm happy to have the chance to review one of your works today~ Blessings, Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 08-May-2011

The Memory Thief by Wendyanne

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Hello WendyAnne, I'm happy to run into one of your works today. I'm in school now (at this late date)and writing academically is trumping writing for fun~ I love this~ it is thought provoking, and beautiful and the truth~ Well done~ Blessings, Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 08-May-2011

A Change of Heart by lola29

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I am sorry for your loss, but love the ending verse which is the truth~ lovely presentation, touching sentiment, not a thing to correct. Mother's wear many hats and healing is one of them; good tribute to your Mom~ Blessings, Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 08-May-2011

Meandering Waters by cheyennewy

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Hello my friend~ my short time here today wouldn't have been complete without finding one of your breathtakingly creative works~ I'm in school now, (at this late date) so writing for fun is trumped by writing academically. I hope you are having a wonderful time in Costa Rica, and I love this well done, inspirational work~ Blessings, Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 08-May-2011

(guernseys graze) haiku by adewpearl

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Strong contest entry, I am sure the picture works perfectly~ I like Haiku because it is short, and to the point~ I wish our farms (many of them) still allowed cattle to graze and wander the area instead of the mass production of today~ Best wishes in the voting booth~ Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 08-May-2011

A Meal To Go by dale steeves

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The title captures attention; beautiful presentation and well done Quatrain contest entry~ best wishes in the voting booth, I think this is a strong entry~ Blessings, Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 08-May-2011

The Face of Change by bard owl

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This is the third Senryu I have reviewed this morning and I can tell you I think this is a strong entry, and the voting is going to be tough in this category~ Captivating title, great presentation, nothing to change, it's perfect in every way~ Best wishes in the voting booth ~ if you don't win the contest, you have already won in creativity~ Blessings, Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 08-May-2011
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Dear Mother by angel123

Exceptional
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This is absolutely stunning, and a fitting Mother's Day tribute for all whose Moms have made their transition~ I am sorry for your loss, and hope that you have someone to cheer you this Mother's Day~ This is a very strong contest entry in my opinion, and I wish you all the best in the voting booth~ great job~ Blessings, Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 08-May-2011
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Where Muses Meet by Bryana

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This is a lovely work in all areas, presentation is stunning, title catching~ I love the last line, and feel exactly like that. Blessings on your day, my creative fanstory friend~ I have not been writing for fun since I went back to school at this late date lol, but I am happy I found this to review today! Blessings, Tricia
Comment Written by PatriciaLiteHickman on 08-May-2011


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